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by cramya » Tue May 12, 2009 8:36 pm
Based on data collected cannot modify John and Sigrid so A and B out IMO

E changes the meaning to more than one significant relationship

D gives the meaning the conclsuion took place earlier than then finding of the relationship.Changes tense "having based" and then "find"

I would go with C

Basing ... find

Wats the OA?
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Re: data collection

by Vemuri » Wed May 13, 2009 2:23 am
IMO A. The original sentence seems just fine.
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by dendude » Wed May 13, 2009 7:38 am
I agree with Vemuri.
A would be my choice too.

I feel the usage of find in C distorts the meaning - indicating that the conclusion resulted in a finding of significant relationships Vs definitely concluding the significant relationship
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by KICKGMATASS123 » Wed May 13, 2009 9:27 am
dendude wrote:I agree with Vemuri.
A would be my choice too.

I feel the usage of find in C distorts the meaning - indicating that the conclusion resulted in a finding of significant relationships Vs definitely concluding the significant relationship
A for me as well..
Based on.. seems accurate with the sentence...

The others are awkward construction
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by sudeep_ar » Wed May 13, 2009 9:41 am
cramya wrote:Based on data collected cannot modify John and Sigrid so A and B out IMO

E changes the meaning to more than one significant relationship

D gives the meaning the conclsuion took place earlier than then finding of the relationship.Changes tense "having based" and then "find"

I would go with C

Basing ... find

Wats the OA?
Agree...
In A, the modifier 'based on.. ' is for conclusion and not John and S..

It should be C
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by PAB2706 » Wed May 13, 2009 7:09 pm
OA is C

cramya...can you please elaborate your thot process while dealing with this SC
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by DeepakR » Wed May 13, 2009 7:50 pm
In C, Basing their conclusion clearly modifies John and Sigrid.

You can ask for yourself,
Basing their conclusion, (who were basing their conclusion - John and Sigrid)

If you think A, Based on data collected (What is based ? Is John and Sigrid based on the data collected ?) that is incorrect.

- Deepak
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by PAB2706 » Thu May 14, 2009 5:06 am
thanks deepak....

cheers!!!
:)
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