As an actress and, more importantly...OG12 dianostic Q49

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As an actress and, more importantly, as a teacher of acting, Stella Adler was one of the most influential artists in the American theater, who trained several generations of actors including Marlon Brando and Robert de Niro.

A. Same as above
B. Stella Adler, one of the most influential artists in the American theater, trained several generations of actors who include
C. Stella Adler was one of the most influential artists in the American theater, training several generations of actors whose ranks included
D. one of the most influential artists in the American theater was Stella Adler, who trained several generations of actors including
E. one of the most influential artists in the American theater, Stella Adler, trained several generations of actors whose ranks included







OA: C

Hi, guys, try this question plz, which is from OG12 dianostic test Q49.

Stucked with B and C, and wrongly chose B..

Can someone explain why B is wrong, and what does "whose ranks" mean?

Thanks very much!
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by HSPA » Fri Apr 22, 2011 1:30 am
Wow.. nice question.. even I went for B. Let us see what atul/aim has to say before pinging experts.
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by atulmangal » Fri Apr 22, 2011 1:57 am
rx_11 wrote:As an actress and, more importantly, as a teacher of acting, Stella Adler was one of the most influential artists in the American theater, who trained several generations of actors including Marlon Brando and Robert de Niro.

A. Same as above
B. Stella Adler, one of the most influential artists in the American theater, trained several generations of actors who include
C. Stella Adler was one of the most influential artists in the American theater, training several generations of actors whose ranks included
D. one of the most influential artists in the American theater was Stella Adler, who trained several generations of actors including
E. one of the most influential artists in the American theater, Stella Adler, trained several generations of actors whose ranks included
Please use the underline option, to indicate the part which contains error (as i'm confused and it taking me a hell lot of time to concentrate)...after that it would be easy for me to participate in this discussion...thanks

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by bubbliiiiiiii » Fri Apr 22, 2011 2:00 am
This question is posted twice and I have corrected it at,

https://www.beatthegmat.com/as-an-actres ... 81589.html
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by rohu27 » Fri Apr 22, 2011 2:09 am
rx_11 wrote:As an actress and, more importantly, as a teacher of acting, Stella Adler was one of the most influential artists in the American theater, who trained several generations of actors including Marlon Brando and Robert de Niro.

A. Same as above
B. Stella Adler, one of the most influential artists in the American theater, trained several generations of actors who include
C. Stella Adler was one of the most influential artists in the American theater, training several generations of actors whose ranks included
D. one of the most influential artists in the American theater was Stella Adler, who trained several generations of actors including
E. one of the most influential artists in the American theater, Stella Adler, trained several generations of actors whose ranks included







OA: C

Hi, guys, try this question plz, which is from OG12 dianostic test Q49.

Stucked with B and C, and wrongly chose B..

Can someone explain why B is wrong, and what does "whose ranks" mean?

Thanks very much!
Please mark the underlined part.
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by HSPA » Fri Apr 22, 2011 2:21 am
Dear brothers rohu and atul,

Let us kindly wait for rx_11 to come back...Please dont pin point and let us stay positive with thought that

He have not underlined it by mistake... he might have missed it..
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by rohu27 » Fri Apr 22, 2011 2:29 am
HSPA wrote:Dear brothers rohu and atul,

Let us kindly wait for rx_11 to come back...Please dont pin point and let us stay positive with thought that

He have not underlined it by mistake... he might have missed it..
thanks :D
i guess iam over reacting ;) edited previous post

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by atulmangal » Fri Apr 22, 2011 6:07 am
Hey guys, lets discuss this question on this thread (follow the link), here @pranay underlined the incorrect part...m really interested in this question...here is the link

https://www.beatthegmat.com/as-an-actres ... 81589.html

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