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by blaster » Tue Sep 06, 2011 1:49 am
If the engineering feats of that early decade remains impressive - boring a mile-long tunnel through a solid mountain, and turning the eastward flow of two rivers westward - the arduous conditions in which the engineers worked are no less remarkable.

A. If the engineering feats of that early decade remains impressive - boring
B. If the engineering feats of that early decade remains impressive - such as the boring of
C. Although the engineering feats of that early decade remains impressive - boring
D. If the feats of engineering in that early decade remains impressive - boring
E. If the engineering feats of that early decade remain impressive - boring
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by cans » Tue Sep 06, 2011 2:13 am
IMO E
Subject - Verb Agreement
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by BellTheGMAT » Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:53 am
One more vote for E

OA plz
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by kdraj » Tue Sep 06, 2011 9:39 am
I will go with C. I think we are comparing two things to show the contrasting phenomena.

Engineering feats and arduous tasks. So I feel to show the contrast between these two "Although" needs to be used.

Please correct me if my reasoning is wrong. Also can I know the source of this problem ?

KD
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by sungoal » Tue Sep 06, 2011 9:45 am
engineering feats is plural. So plural verb "remain" should be used. Only answer choice E corrects this error.
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by aspirant2011 » Tue Sep 06, 2011 11:41 am
It should be nothing other than option E because of subject-verb error
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by mundasingh123 » Tue Sep 06, 2011 11:58 am
did you transcribe the sc properly .Boring and Turning are examples of feats that the first part of the SC talks about . Therefore we need to use such as to introduce these examples .
At the same time E is the only option that uses the correct verb . But C is the only option that introduces the examples appropriately
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by kdraj » Tue Sep 06, 2011 7:11 pm
Thank you. I now can see the Subject Verb agreement and will go with E.

But I still have doubts about the usage of If here. Can somebody please explain the usage of IF in this sentence please.

Thanks,
KD
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by crick » Tue Sep 06, 2011 7:16 pm
+1 for E.

S-V wins over other style errors.

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by blaster » Tue Sep 06, 2011 10:40 pm
mundasingh123 wrote:did you transcribe the sc properly .Boring and Turning are examples of feats that the first part of the SC talks about . Therefore we need to use such as to introduce these examples .
At the same time E is the only option that uses the correct verb . But C is the only option that introduces the examples appropriately
question is correct.

OA is E
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by aspirant2011 » Thu Sep 08, 2011 9:29 am
blaster wrote:If the engineering feats of that early decade remains impressive - boring a mile-long tunnel through a solid mountain, and turning the eastward flow of two rivers westward - the arduous conditions in which the engineers worked are no less remarkable.

A. If the engineering feats of that early decade remains impressive - boring
B. If the engineering feats of that early decade remains impressive - such as the boring of
C. Although the engineering feats of that early decade remains impressive - boring
D. If the feats of engineering in that early decade remains impressive - boring ----passive
E. If the engineering feats of that early decade remain impressive - boring
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by kul512 » Sun Oct 16, 2011 11:18 am
cans wrote:IMO E
Subject - Verb Agreement
subject verb agreement is quite clear but the structure of the dependent clause is using the phrase
.......no less.....
and i think using "although" will be make sentence more clear.
please correct me if am wrong. this is not just about options i am asking a general question.

Example:
Although Ruchi worked hard to stood first Reshu's perseverance was no less remarkable.
Vs.
If Ruchi worked hard to stood first Reshu's perseverance was no less remarkable.

i think first one sounds better....
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by GmatKiss » Sun Oct 16, 2011 11:22 am
IMO: E
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by zaarathelab » Sun Oct 16, 2011 9:12 pm
+ 1 for E (All others have s/v agreement issues)
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