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by richachampion » Sat Sep 02, 2017 4:19 am
Despite protests from some waste-disposal companies, state health officials have ordered the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches to be measured and that the results be published.

A. the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches to be measured and that the results be
B. that seawater at popular beaches should be measured for their levels of bacteria, with the results being
C. the measure of levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches and the results to be
D. seawater measured at popular beaches for levels of bacteria, with their results
E. that the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches be measured and the results
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by richachampion » Sat Sep 02, 2017 4:46 am
In the analysis please also help me with why "with" is wrong in B and D, and what meaning changes they create.

I think comma+with modifies the actions.
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