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by e-GMAT » Tue Jan 29, 2013 7:36 pm
nisagl750 wrote: A. Weaker than expected demand is not because Apple's share has declined (demand and share are independent of each other)
Also, Apple's share........has declined. (Has is required instead of have)
This is perfect analysis...No questions from my side for you @nisagl750 :)

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by nisagl750 » Tue Jan 29, 2013 9:14 pm
e-GMAT wrote:
This is perfect analysis...No questions from my side for you @nisagl750 :)

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Payal
Hi Payal,

Can I ask one general question here?
"I am looking forward to hearing from you"

I am from India, and I remember in my school, I was taught something different.

"I am looking forward to hear from you"

OR I am looking forward to meet you
instead of
I am looking forward to meeting you

but GMAT follows the second sentence type.

Can you please explain a bit on when to use verb and when verb+ing , or do we always use verb+ing in these statements?

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by Lifetron » Tue Jan 29, 2013 11:43 pm
e-GMAT wrote:
gughanbose wrote:A - 'have' is wrong
D and E - Changes the actual meaning. They suggest that "Weaker demand caused the shares to decline". But, it is the other way round.
Hence, C !
@gughanbose, good analysis. It would be great if you could analyze choice A slightly more. I just want to make sure that your analysis is complete. Would choice A be correct if I changed "have" to "has", i.e. if I removed the SV number error. Let me know what you think.
Hi e-GMAT,
Apart from have/has[which is an obvious error], I find that "because" placed awkwardly. I really can't pin point why, but it seems wrong. I am not so sure though !

Waiting for Official Explanation !

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by patanjali.purpose » Wed Jan 30, 2013 2:44 pm
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patanjali.purpose wrote:
"iPhone is DUE TO weaker-than-expected demand" implies WEAKER DEMAND modifies iPhone. Or we can say iPhone WAS CAUSED BY WEAKER DEMAND (illogical). Drop A/C
@patanjali.purpose, first of all great attempt at this question. Secondly, may I ask you to revisit your analysis of choice A. You interpreted choice A as "iPhone is due to...". I am not sure why you skipped the introductory part of this sentence when you made this interpretation.

Looking forward to hearing from you. :)

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Payal
Thanks for pointing the mistake. I missed that for some unknown (donot remember now) reason,but your detailed analysis is very useful.