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by johnkkim » Mon Jun 22, 2009 8:15 pm
Hello, which of the following sentence makes more sense?

1. When my family first immigrated to the US, I was faced with the challenge of tackling a new foreign language as a young child.

OR

2. When my family first immigrated to the US, I was faced with the challenge of tackling a new foreign language.

Please let me know if Sentence #1 sounds wordy/redundant.

Thanks!
John
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