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by beatthegmatinsept » Thu Sep 09, 2010 9:17 am
Gurpinder wrote:In choice A,

this is wrong? right?

A: the harmless soldier fly has a body that resembles those of the stinging black wasp

It should be that?
Yes, 'those' would have been right if it was "the harmless soldier flies' have bodies that resemble those of the...
SInce, we have a singular fly, 'that' is appropriate.
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by Gurpinder » Thu Sep 09, 2010 9:18 am
beatthegmatinsept wrote:
Gurpinder wrote:In choice A,

this is wrong? right?

A: the harmless soldier fly has a body that resembles those of the stinging black wasp

It should be that?
Yes, 'those' would have been right if it was "the harmless soldier flies' have bodies that resemble those of the...
SInce, we have a singular fly, 'that' is appropriate.
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by uwhusky » Thu Sep 09, 2010 9:36 am
beatthegmatinsept wrote:
Gurpinder wrote:In choice A,

this is wrong? right?

A: the harmless soldier fly has a body that resembles those of the stinging black wasp

It should be that?
Yes, 'those' would have been right if it was "the harmless soldier flies' have bodies that resemble those of the...
SInce, we have a singular fly, 'that' is appropriate.
Actually A is incorrect even if you did change the quantity in the noun. According to MGMAT SC on page 71, if you are to change the quantity, you should repeat the noun as oppose to just changing the relative pronoun. So it would have to say "resembles bodies of the stinging black wasp".
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by Whitney Garner » Mon Oct 04, 2010 7:50 pm
akhpad wrote:Source: Knewton

An exemplary mimic, the harmless soldier fly has a body that resembles those of the stinging black wasp and thus is able to frighten away predators.

A: the harmless soldier fly has a body that resembles those of the stinging black wasp
B: the harmless soldier fly has a body resembling that of a stinging black wasp
C: the body of the harmless soldier fly resembles a stinging black wasp's
D: the harmless soldier fly's body resembles the stinging black wasps'
E: the body of the harmless soldier fly resembles those of the stinging black wasps

I confused in modifier in context of meaning.
An exemplary mimic => I believe that it is a model and it should refer to "the harmless soldier fly" or "the body". I confused in selecting here.

OA: B
Let's attack these issues one by one.

(1) As noted by earlier posters, the lead-in modifier "An exemplary mimic" must be followed immediately by the noun it is modifying. We can gather that the mimic is meant to be the animal from both the definition of mimic (it needs to be something that can "perform" the action, so the fly itself makes more sense than the body) and the remainder of the sentence (the mimic is able to frighten away predators - this is the fly, not the body doing the frightening). This actually eliminates C, D and E. Notice that in D, the lead-in modifier is followed by "the harmless soldier fly's body." The fly only shows up as a possessive modifier and not the noun itself; the lead-in is back to modifying body again. In C and E it is more obvious that "the body" is the modified noun.

(2) Now for the debate between A and B. The real crux is the use of the plural term "those". The "body" is singular as is the "stinging black wasp", so the plural pronoun is incorrect.

So to sum it up - we drop C, D and E due to the modifier issue, and A loses on a pronoun.

Hope this helps!
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by GMATMadeEasy » Tue Oct 05, 2010 3:42 am
(ASIDE: this sentence would have been correct if it read "the harmless soldier fly has a body that resembles those of stinging black waspS." Then the plural "those" would correctly identify the bodies of multiple black wasps. To say "that resembles THAT of the stinging black wasp" would simply sound a bit off).
those will not have any clear antecedents in your modified sentence ? Can we really use a pronoun this way . There i s nowhere bodies in the sentence before "those" .

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by Whitney Garner » Tue Oct 05, 2010 7:27 am
GMATMadeEasy wrote:
(ASIDE: this sentence would have been correct if it read "the harmless soldier fly has a body that resembles those of stinging black waspS." Then the plural "those" would correctly identify the bodies of multiple black wasps. To say "that resembles THAT of the stinging black wasp" would simply sound a bit off).
those will not have any clear antecedents in your modified sentence ? Can we really use a pronoun this way . There i s nowhere bodies in the sentence before "those" .
You are exactly right!! That'll teach me to write replies so late. "That of..." and "Those of..." follow the same agreement rules as all other pronouns, so correct answers might be any of the following:

"the harmless soldier fly has a body that resembles that of the stinging black wasp"
"the harmless soldier fly has a body resembling a stinging black wasp's"
"the harmless soldier fly has a body resembling that of a stinging black wasp" (the correct choice B)


Again, nice catch!!

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by GMATMadeEasy » Tue Oct 05, 2010 8:25 am
@Whitney Garner : Thank you . We are GMAT bitten creatures who eat and drink the words and grammar.

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