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by Blue_Skies » Fri May 31, 2013 5:19 pm
Persistent assertions of executives more based on self interest and emotions than ground realities that the issue of moderate hike in their salaries is completely irrelevant and meaningless from the perspective of viability of the company compounded matters like anything.

A. Persistent assertions of executives more based on self interest and emotions than ground realities that
B. Executives' persistent assertions that are more based on self interest and emotions than ground realities
C. Persistent assertions based on self interest and emotions more than ground realities of executives that
D. Persistent assertions, which are more based on self interest and emotions than ground realities of executives, that
E. Persistent assertions, which are more based on self interest and emotions than ground realities of executives, about
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by aaggar7 » Fri May 31, 2013 11:18 pm
C??

I am not sure,but I got to C by applying below logic.

either of the two constructions is correct.

More based on X than on Y

Based on more X than Y - C follows this structure.

Please post theOA and explanation.
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by [email protected] » Fri May 31, 2013 11:34 pm
Is it "B"???

As only B clearly relates Executives, perception, emotion and ground reality. Rest all creates ambiguity.

also B only clearly relates executives with their.
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by GMATGuruNY » Sat Jun 01, 2013 4:05 am
Blue_Skies wrote:Persistent assertions of executives more based on self interest and emotions than ground realities that the issue of moderate hike in their salaries is completely irrelevant and meaningless from the perspective of viability of the company compounded matters like anything.

A. Persistent assertions of executives more based on self interest and emotions than ground realities that
B. Executives' persistent assertions that are more based on self interest and emotions than ground realities
C. Persistent assertions based on self interest and emotions more than ground realities of executives that
D. Persistent assertions, which are more based on self interest and emotions than ground realities of executives, that
E. Persistent assertions, which are more based on self interest and emotions than ground realities of executives, about
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