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by karthikpandian19 » Thu Jun 07, 2012 9:31 pm
The rate of patents being created is constantly accelerating as technology advances forward


The rate of patents being created is constantly accelerating as technology advances forward

As technology advances, the rate of patents being created is constantly accelerating

The number of patents created is accelerating as technology advances

As technology advances forward, the rate of patents being created is constantly accelerating

As technology advances, patents are constantly accelerating
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by sam2304 » Thu Jun 07, 2012 10:20 pm
A/D - advances forward - redundant
E - patents are accelerating - wrong meaning
C - number accelerating seems awkward - number increases is the right one.

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by karthikpandian19 » Thu Jun 07, 2012 10:56 pm
OA is B
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