California It is!!

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California It is!!

by rajatvmittal » Thu Jun 13, 2013 10:48 am
A 2009 study from the California State Housing Authority concluded that conversion from ownership to rental properties has often been difficult; it has been more common for some townhouses and other "attached" homes that are relatively small and old, located in central cities.

difficult; it has been more common for some townhouses and other "attached" homes that are relatively small and old, located in central cities.
difficult; it has been more common for some townhouses and other "attached" homes that are relatively small, old, and that are located in central cities.
difficult; it has been more common for some townhouses and other "attached" homes, which are relatively small and old, and located in central cities.
difficult: It has been more common for some townhouses and other "attached" homes that are relatively small and old and located in central cities.
difficult: It has been more common for some townhouses and other "attached" homes that are relatively small and old, and located in central cities.
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by faraz_jeddah » Thu Jun 13, 2013 11:27 pm
We should use a colon as the two parts of the sentence cannot stand on their own.

Comes down to D and E.


I would go with D as the comma is incorrectly used before and located in central cities.

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