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by [email protected] » Tue Mar 04, 2014 2:30 pm
Hi abhi.litb,

It would be easier for the various experts here (myself included) to help you with your question if you post it directly into the Forum (instead of asking us all to download it).

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by theCodeToGMAT » Tue Mar 04, 2014 9:08 pm
"recommend" is a subjunctive verb..... only [spoiler]{E} [/spoiler]serves the rule correctly..

Rule:
<subjunctive verb> + that + ... + <ROOT FORM OF VERB>

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by GMATGuruNY » Wed Mar 05, 2014 3:44 am
In 1984 medical researchers at Harvard and Stanford universities concluded that sedentary life-styles lead to heart and lung diseases that shorten lives, strongly recommending middle-aged people to undertake some form of regular exercise.

(A). strongly recommending middle-aged people to
(B). strongly recommending that middle-aged people should
(C). and strongly recommended for middle-aged people to
(D). and their strong recommendation was for middle-aged people to
(E). and they strongly recommended that middle-aged people
A bossy word serves to express a command or recommendation: suggests, recommends, insists, etc.
Bossy words typically require the COMMAND SUBJUNCTIVE.
The structure of the command subjunctive is BOSSY WORD + THAT + NOUN + BARE INFINITIVE.
The bare infinitive is the infinitive form of a verb with the to omitted.
Example: The bill MANDATES that a bank DISCLOSE its assets.
Here, mandates is a bossy word, while disclose is the bare infinitive form of TO disclose.

In the SC above, the researchers are being bossy: they are RECOMMENDING.
Only E correctly employs the command subjunctive:
They strongly RECOMMENDED that middle-aged people UNDERTAKE some form of exercise.
Here, recommended is a bossy word, while undertake is the bare infinitive form of TO undertake.

The correct answer is E.
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by aflaam » Tue Feb 02, 2016 6:18 am
GMATGuruNY wrote:
In 1984 medical researchers at Harvard and Stanford universities concluded that sedentary life-styles lead to heart and lung diseases that shorten lives, strongly recommending middle-aged people to undertake some form of regular exercise.

(A). strongly recommending middle-aged people to
(B). strongly recommending that middle-aged people should
(C). and strongly recommended for middle-aged people to
(D). and their strong recommendation was for middle-aged people to
(E). and they strongly recommended that middle-aged people
A bossy word serves to express a command or recommendation: suggests, recommends, insists, etc.
Bossy words typically require the COMMAND SUBJUNCTIVE.
The structure of the command subjunctive is BOSSY WORD + THAT + NOUN + BARE INFINITIVE.
The bare infinitive is the infinitive form of a verb with the to omitted.
Example: The bill MANDATES that a bank DISCLOSE its assets.
Here, mandates is a bossy word, while disclose is the bare infinitive form of TO disclose.

In the SC above, the researchers are being bossy: they are RECOMMENDING.
Only E correctly employs the command subjunctive:
They strongly RECOMMENDED that middle-aged people UNDERTAKE some form of exercise.
Here, recommended is a bossy word, while undertake is the bare infinitive form of TO undertake.

The correct answer is E.
Isn't they in E redundant?

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by thang » Fri Mar 18, 2016 6:52 am
C show the purpurse of the recommendation. this meaning is not logic in this context.

E show the content of the recommendation and so is correct.
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by ceilidh.erickson » Fri Mar 18, 2016 7:25 am
aflaam wrote: Isn't they in E redundant?
Nope.

What you're suggesting is that without a "they," then the basic structure of the sentence would be "researchers concluded and recommended." This would be perfectly correct... except that there should not be a comma separating parallel verbs. We don't say "researchers concluded, and recommended."

Because there is a comma after "lives," separating the two verbs, this sentence should contain two independent clauses, rather than a subject + two verbs. So, the basic structure of this sentence is "researchers concluded, and they recommended." Perfectly correct.
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by aflaam » Wed Mar 23, 2016 9:45 pm
ceilidh.erickson wrote:
aflaam wrote: Isn't they in E redundant?
Nope.

What you're suggesting is that without a "they," then the basic structure of the sentence would be "researchers concluded and recommended." This would be perfectly correct... except that there should not be a comma separating parallel verbs. We don't say "researchers concluded, and recommended."

Because there is a comma after "lives," separating the two verbs, this sentence should contain two independent clauses, rather than a subject + two verbs. So, the basic structure of this sentence is "researchers concluded, and they recommended." Perfectly correct.
Thanks for the wonderful explanation Ceilidh,
Are A and B also incorrect because ,Ving modifies the immediatly preceding clause i.e disease that...?
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