Mo2men wrote:1- Is 'as + compared' considered wrong? Is there any official question with this construction?
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as compared is a valid construction.
An OA in GMATPrep:
CEO's now earn 419 times the pay of blue-collar workers, as compared to 42 times their pay, the ratio in 1980.
2- If the OA changed to be 'with those whose parents are native English speakers', then is it clear that 'those' refer to children? Is it understandable that refer to children?or may it refer to parents?
Proposed revision:
Studies of test scores show that watching television has a markedly positive effect on children whose parents speak English as a second language, as compared with those...
Here, it is not immediately clear whether
those is intended to refer to
children or to
parents.
The OA -- which avoids this ambiguity -- is clearly better than the proposed revision.
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