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by pradeepkaushal9518 » Sat Jul 03, 2010 11:03 pm
Environmental scientists have been careful to point out that the pollution of estuaries has various causes, including seepage from septic fields, overuse of waterways by boats lacking proper waste disposal facilities, spraying indiscriminate pesticides by farmers, and inadequate protection of the water table.


spraying indiscriminate pesticides by farmers

the indiscriminate spraying of pesticides by farmers

pesticides which are sprayed by farmers indiscriminately

pesticides being sprayed in indiscriminate amounts by farmers

farmers who spray pesticides indiscriminately

A or B plz explain
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by hardik.jadeja » Sat Jul 03, 2010 11:45 pm
Pick B for parallelism.

Environmental scientists have been careful to point out that the pollution of estuaries has various causes, including seepage from septic fields, overuse of waterways by boats lacking proper waste disposal facilities, the indiscriminate spraying of pesticides by farmers, and inadequate protection of the water table.

In A, indiscriminate incorrectly modifies pesticides. Option B fixes this error.

Hope that helps...
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by viju9162 » Wed Jul 07, 2010 2:57 am
Dear Hardik,

And also all of them are noun phrases right? In B, this is corrected..

Please correct me if I am wrong ...

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by hardik.jadeja » Wed Jul 07, 2010 3:48 am
Yes, you are correct..
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by frank1 » Wed Jul 07, 2010 8:58 am
but whats about parallelism here
overuse of ......spaying of
they are not parallel to each other
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