I'm coming from a non-profit background (my niche is religious non-profits). I have a great heart for these organizations and after working in the industry for a number of years, realize the deep need for financial, managerial, and strategic consulting within the industry. So many of these grassroots orgs could benefit from more strategic and sound advice. The difficulty for them is finding people with both the understanding of the specifics of their industry and the business acumen to provide solutions. I believe with an MBA, I will have both.

Does this come across too unfocused for a business school app? Or do I sound like I'm on the right track?