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by gmat740 » Thu Jun 18, 2009 12:25 am
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In 1922, when Truman was almost forty years old, he was living in his mother-in-law’s house, watching the haberdashery store he opened three years earlier go bankrupt, and he faced a future with no visible prospects.
(A) opened three years earlier go bankrupt, and he faced
(B) opened three years earlier go bankrupt and faced
(C) had opened three years earlier go bankrupt, and he was facing
(D) had opened three years earlier go bankrupt, and facing
(E) was opening three years earlier going bankrupt, and facing


[spoiler]IMO-C
OA-D[/spoiler]
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by goelmohit2002 » Thu Jun 18, 2009 6:23 am
IMO "D" is better since watching....."he was facing" are non parallel....in "C"
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by axat » Thu Jun 18, 2009 6:41 am
IMO C too.

Since 'Facing' in D modifies the store.

Source? 1000 SC? Then we ought to take the OA with a pinch of salt.
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by benissleeping » Thu Jun 18, 2009 6:56 am
I agree with OA D.


"he was living in his mother-in-law’s house, watching the haberdashery store...and facing"

all parallel
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by gmat740 » Sat Jun 20, 2009 8:02 am
Guys let me answer my own question

I did a little research and came up with this

In 1922, when Truman was almost forty years old, he was living in his mother-in-law’s house, watching the haberdashery store he opened three years earlier go bankrupt, and he faced a future with no visible prospects.

check out the red colour


Only C,D and E has "Facing"

nOW CHECK them one by one
(C) had opened three years earlier go bankrupt, and he was facing
we do need a past perfect tense but was is really awkward here

(E) was opening three years earlier going bankrupt, and facing

changes to simple past (which is not required)

(D) had opened three years earlier go bankrupt, and facing
past perfect tense and proper parallelism
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by sands_of_time » Sat Jun 20, 2009 9:42 am
past perfect tense and proper parallelism
I second gmat740.

D is correct.
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Re: Truman

by maihuna » Sat Jun 20, 2009 10:06 am
gmat740 wrote:350
In 1922, when Truman was almost forty years old, he was living in his mother-in-law’s house, watching the haberdashery store he opened three years earlier go bankrupt, and he faced a future with no visible prospects.
(A) opened three years earlier go bankrupt, and he faced
(B) opened three years earlier go bankrupt and faced
(C) had opened three years earlier go bankrupt, and he was facing
(D) had opened three years earlier go bankrupt, and facing
(E) was opening three years earlier going bankrupt, and facing


[spoiler]IMO-C
OA-D[/spoiler]
Two past activities watching and facing should be parallel...so possible answer choices are C D E, out of these, E is out, as opening a store is not an continious process....and he was facing is trouble with C as watching is one of the activity...so the other should be only facing...and not and he was facing.....
Charged up again to beat the beast :)
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by inactived » Tue Sep 28, 2010 7:49 am
Can someone please evaporate what role "go bankrupt" plays in the sentence?

Many thanks
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by niksworth » Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:16 am
inactived wrote:Can someone please evaporate what role "go bankrupt" plays in the sentence?

Many thanks
@inactived,

you meant elaborate right :)

go bankrupt is simply pointing out what Truman was watching - He was watching the haberdashery store go bankrupt.
scio me nihil scire
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by shurti4you » Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:49 am
D because of parallelism.
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by max37274 » Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:58 am
In 1922, when Truman was almost forty years old, he was living in his mother-in-law's house, watching the haberdashery store he opened three years earlier go bankrupt, and he faced a future with no visible prospects.
(A) opened three years earlier go bankrupt, and he faced
(B) opened three years earlier go bankrupt and faced
(C) had opened three years earlier go bankrupt, and he was facing Here second "He" in He was facing can refer to anyone as it is a complete sentence on its own; Also "watching" and "he was facing" are not parallel
(D) had opened three years earlier go bankrupt, and facing correct
(E) was opening three years earlier going bankrupt, and facing
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