SC: explanations please

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SC: explanations please

by *shweta* » Sat Sep 29, 2007 10:09 pm
The spraying of pesticides can be carefully planned, but accidents, weather conditions that could not be foreseen and pilot errors often cause much larger deposits of spray than they had anticipated.

-weather conditions that are not foreseeable, and pilot errors often cause much larger deposits of spray than

-weather conditions that cannot be foreseen, and pilot errors often cause much larger deposits of spray than

Please help me choose between these options
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by raulverde » Sun Sep 30, 2007 7:28 am
Shweta,

I would go with :
-weather conditions that cannot be foreseen, and pilot errors often cause much larger deposits of spray than

The first choice is awkward - "weather conditions that are not foreseeable"

Moreover, the better use of "not foreseeable" is "unforeseeable".

Please post the correct answer

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