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16 Days out - Let´s review each other!
Please rate and review my AWA essay from the free Veritas Prep CAT test - I´d be happy to review yours in exchange! Candidate: Our city's students have suffered long enough. Over the mayor's four years in office, our district's math and science scores have hovered well below the national average, ...
- by Christian Krause
Mon Oct 10, 2016 10:47 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: 16 Days out - Let´s review each other!
- Replies: 0
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Hi, I believe you adequately addressed the flaws in this argument. However, I believe you´re focusing a little bit too much on your own alternative scenario in paragraph 2. I think it would have been sufficient to state that the author fails to consider the revenue/income side of operating at sever...
- by Christian Krause
Thu Oct 06, 2016 3:49 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Apogee Company AWA (Please review!!)
- Replies: 1
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I like your detailed style of argumentation. I think you recognized all the major flaws and sufficiently elaborated why they are incorrect, insufficient or unjustified. I also believe that you might optimize scoring by writing shorter, more precise sentences as well as a slightly shorter essay overa...
- by Christian Krause
Thu Oct 06, 2016 3:39 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: AWA feedback please?
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1792
Would you like to review my AWA Essay? Thank you!!!
This AWA prompt is from the official GMAT Prep Test Sotware, Exam #1: The following appeared as part of an article in the business section of a local newspaper: "Motorcycle X has been manufactured in the United States for over 70 years. Although one foreign company has copied the motorcycle an...
- by Christian Krause
Thu Oct 06, 2016 2:39 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Would you like to review my AWA Essay? Thank you!!!
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1851