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Vitamin-A defficiency
In parts of South America, vitamin-A deficiency is a serious health problem, especially among children. In one region, agriculturists hope to improve nutrition by encouraging farmers to plant a new variety of sweet potato called SPK004 that is rich in betacarotene, which the body converts into vitam...
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Sun May 13, 2012 12:41 am- Forum: Critical Reasoning
- Topic: Vitamin-A defficiency
- Replies: 4
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electric car
A major impediment to wide acceptance of electric vehicles even on the part of people who use their cars almost exclusively for commuting is the inability to use their electric vehicles for occasional extended trips. In an attempt to make purchasing electric vehicles more attractive to commuters, on...
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Sun May 13, 2012 12:23 am- Forum: Critical Reasoning
- Topic: electric car
- Replies: 4
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PLEASE RATE MY ARGUMENT ESSAY.
The following appeared in an announcement issued by the publisher of The Mercury, a weekly newspaper: “Since a competing lower-priced newspaper, The Bugle, was started five years ago, The Mercury’s circulation has declined by 10,000 readers. The best way to get more people to read The Mercury is...
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Mon May 07, 2012 9:11 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: PLEASE RATE MY ARGUMENT ESSAY.
- Replies: 0
- Views: 1550
Please rate my issue essay
“In any enterprise, the process of making or doing something is ultimately more important than the final product.� Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion expressed above. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, o...
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Mon May 07, 2012 8:04 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate my issue essay
- Replies: 0
- Views: 1486
thanks mohit,
I do not want to postpone my date. the reason being that the future GMAT exams involve a new portion IR.
how should I prepare for AWA? i have posted some essays on BTG.
manoj
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Thu May 03, 2012 2:40 am- Forum: I just Beat The GMAT!
- Topic: GMAT 730: My prep, resources and test strategy
- Replies: 13
- Views: 19016
PLEASE RATE MY FIRST ISSUE ESSAY
ISSUE PROMPT: “The primary responsibility of citizens is to obey their nation’s civil and criminal laws.� Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading. RESPONS...
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Wed May 02, 2012 5:42 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: PLEASE RATE MY FIRST ISSUE ESSAY
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1308
hi mohit,
your post and attachments are very helpful for me. my test date is 31st may, and i am still not very sure with DS and CR.
please advise.....
manoj
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Wed May 02, 2012 3:04 am- Forum: I just Beat The GMAT!
- Topic: GMAT 730: My prep, resources and test strategy
- Replies: 13
- Views: 19016
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Tue May 01, 2012 10:58 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate my essay.
- Replies: 6
- Views: 17302
hi jaggu,
how are you?
i would rate your essay as 4.5.
avoid punctuation and spelling mistakes. overall it was good. keep it up.
manoj
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Tue May 01, 2012 10:51 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Kindly review my first essay - Analysis of Issue
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2310
hi dij. yoor efforts are good but i feel you were using more difficult words unnecessarily. using difficult words does not guarantee a higher score. also, you were using same words from the issue in first paragraph, this shows the lack of new words at your end. try to avoid that. please correct me ,...
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Tue May 01, 2012 10:41 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please grade my analysis of issue essay, thanks
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1667
HI SDK,
your response is quite impressive ,i will rate the same in the range of 5.5 to 6.0.
just before submitting your response try to review your response, as it would reduce the repeatability of the same words.
Manoj
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Tue May 01, 2012 10:29 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: AWA Essays evaluation
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1299
PLEASE RATE MY ARGUMENT ESSAY
Argument: Some states are creating new laws that restrict the use of handheld cell phones by drivers of automobiles. Such legislation, however, is sheer folly. Although some people with cell phones undoubtedly cause problems on the road, including serious accidents, the majority do not. Besides, pro...
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Sun Apr 29, 2012 4:58 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: PLEASE RATE MY ARGUMENT ESSAY
- Replies: 0
- Views: 1874
Hi gurpreet your essay is pretty good ,i will rate you in the range of 4.5 to 5.
Suggestion: Include Separately Conclusion at the end of your essay, so quite possible your scoring would go up.
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Sun Apr 29, 2012 4:47 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please review my essay - I'll return the favor of course :)
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1340
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Sun Apr 29, 2012 4:38 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Analysis of Issue--Energy Conservation--Please review
- Replies: 12
- Views: 41483
PLEASE RATE MY ARGUMENT ESSAY
"Most Business analysts for the drug store industry have stated that even when a nation's economy is weak, drug stores profit are unlikely to decline appreciably. While consumers might put off some kind of purchases when the economy is slow. Prescription and over-the-counter drug purchases are ...
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Sun Apr 29, 2012 4:30 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: PLEASE RATE MY ARGUMENT ESSAY
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1136