To Josephine Baker, Paris was her home long before

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by Geva@EconomistGMAT » Thu Feb 03, 2011 2:46 am
winnerhere wrote:To Josephine Baker, Paris was her home long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate

Hey guys....the "IT" that I have highlighted in the above sentence - is it ok put an "IT" there , without referring anything before in the sentence.

I am asking this as noonbe has pointed it out as an error
As a general rule, yo are correct - pronouns need to other nouns/pronouns. However, "it" can also be used as a subject replacement in a sentence that has no natural subject.
Examples:
It is raining.
It was fashionable to be an expatriate long before last tuesady.

When serving as a subject replacement in such a sentence, the pronoun "it" does not need to refer to anything.

This discussion is an old one, and I hope that whoever started this no longer needs this (i.e. have done the GMAT, got the score they want, and moved on with their lives) but I think I can clarify the modifier error (or lack thereof): time references are exempt from the modifier restriction, and do no need to modify the noun immediately following them, or anything, for that matter. Even though a time reference may look like a modifier (in the sense that it is not a standalone sentence with a subject and a verb), it is NOT a modifier in that respect - it does not need to modify what follows it.

Thus, "Long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, Josephine Baker...." is ok because the modifying clause is actually a time reference - it answers the question "when?", and thus does not fall under the modifier rules. Josephine Baker can follow such a time reference, because the time reference does not need to modify anything.
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by GMATMadeEasy » Thu Feb 03, 2011 8:33 am
@Geva : Could you ,please, help out to figure out the error(s) in option B . i have gone through OG but it does not make much sense :( .
B. For Joshephine baker, long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, paris was her home

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by Geva@EconomistGMAT » Thu Feb 03, 2011 9:17 am
GMATMadeEasy wrote:@Geva : Could you ,please, help out to figure out the error(s) in option B . i have gone through OG but it does not make much sense :( .
B. For Joshephine baker, long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, paris was her home
As a general rule, it would be redundant to have a pronoun refer to a noun directly preceding it and separated by a comma - both can act as the subject of the same clause, and it's unclear which is the subject. .

Incorrect: GMATMadeEasy, he is a clever boy.

It makes sense if the prnoun itself is the subject or object or a second clause

Correct: GMATMadeEasy is a clever boy, but he doesn't like pronouns

In the correct sentence, the pronoun "he" refers to the noun GMATMadeeasy, but the difference is that that the pronoun is now the subject of a new clause, as evidenced by the conjunction "but", and the fact that both the noune and the pronoun have their own main verb.
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by winnerhere » Fri Feb 04, 2011 10:44 pm
Geva,

Thanks a lot...You have provided many useful points in this thread

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by Geva@EconomistGMAT » Sun Feb 06, 2011 1:11 am
winnerhere wrote:Geva,

Thanks a lot...You have provided many useful points in this thread
You're welcome!
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by destroyerofgmat » Wed Feb 22, 2012 7:46 pm
Geva, hi I have a question for you about answer choice D. It was an attractive answer when I was first doing the problem as I thought the modifier placement was correct. However, I then noticed the "Josephine Baker made Paris her home, ....." was in between two commas and thought this is a non-essential modifier and that the "she" after the second comma could not "point" to Josephine Baker in those commas, so I ended up not choosing it. How can I recognize that the two commas don't necessarily signal a non-essential modifier and not make that mistake going forward?

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by tanviet » Fri Sep 14, 2012 4:50 am
I think this is hardest question.

The point is the parallelism between 2 clause.

A makes Paris her home
and
she remains.

A and She are subject of the two clause. This situation is popular. The sentence is most clear and nice when this parallelism is maintained.

In fact, we can not realize that "her" is redundant in choice A. We can only remember the parallelism and find out the parallelism error.

This kind of parallelism appears infrequently in og, gmatprep and prep books.

I want the expert to discuss more on this question. The error like "her" in choice A is too minor to realize and the fact is that we can easily to explain this question but can not win the question on the test day.

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by Crystal W » Sat Jul 02, 2016 6:30 am
Can someone explain why C is not correct?
Thanks in advance!