The proliferation of so-called cybersquatters, people who register the Internet
domain names of high-profile companies in hopes of reselling the rights to those names for a profit, led to passing the Anti-Cybersquatting Consumer Protection Act in 1999, allowing companies to seek up to $100,000 in damages against those who register domain names with the sole intent of selling them later.
(A) passing the Anti-Cybersquatting Consumer Protection Act in 1999, allowing companies to seek up to $100,000 in damages against those who register domain names with the sole intent of selling
(B) the passage of the Anti-Cybersquatting Consumer Protection Act in 1999, which allows companies to seek up to $100,000 in damages against those who register domain names with the sole intent that they will sell
(C) the passage in 1999 of the Anti-Cybersquatting Consumer Protection Act, which allows companies to seek up to $100,000 in damages against those who register domain names with the sole intent of selling
(D) the Anti-Cybersquatting Consumer Protection Act, which was passed in 1999, and it allows companies to seek up to $100,000 in damages against those who register domain names with the sole intent to sell
(E) the Anti-Cybersquatting Consumer Protection Act, passed in 1999 and allowing companies to seek up to $100,000 in damages against those who register domain names with the sole intent of
OA is C.
Question: In an answer choice A, I agree that it uses incorrect idiom "led to passing" but i want to know whether the usage of "allowing" after comma is correct ? I understand that it (allowing) modifies complete preceding clause but I want to know whether it should ALWAYS be applicable to the preceding clause's subject as well ?
GMATPrep - Ing modifier in the role of an adverb
This topic has expert replies
-
- Legendary Member
- Posts: 768
- Joined: Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:46 am
- Thanked: 21 times
- Followed by:7 members
-
- Legendary Member
- Posts: 1112
- Joined: Sat Feb 26, 2011 11:16 am
- Thanked: 77 times
- Followed by:49 members
@GMATMadeEasy
My 2 cents
Buddy i used to think that this rule always work in all the cases, but a few days ago, a fellow mate @Rohu told me that he attend a "Thursday's with Ron video" and there Ron mentioned that COMMA + INCLUDING modifies the preceding NOUN or NOUN PHRASE just like NO COMMA + -ING modifiers DO...so this word "Including" is an exception...
My 2 cents
Buddy i used to think that this rule always work in all the cases, but a few days ago, a fellow mate @Rohu told me that he attend a "Thursday's with Ron video" and there Ron mentioned that COMMA + INCLUDING modifies the preceding NOUN or NOUN PHRASE just like NO COMMA + -ING modifiers DO...so this word "Including" is an exception...
-
- Legendary Member
- Posts: 768
- Joined: Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:46 am
- Thanked: 21 times
- Followed by:7 members
@atulmangal: Thanks. yeah , about including I am aware of. Infact, if you look at the meaning of the word 'include', it is apparent that how it can play a role of modifying whole clause.
My question in the above SC is for "allowing" .. allowing companies to seek bla ba..
Precisely I am asking whether in the answer choice A , "allowing" should be considered as modifying "proliferation" that would be non-sensical though . SO this could be an another reason to destroy A . But I am not sure.
My 2 cents as well : Never do a single SC without using some normal logic/common sense.Think whether meaning makes sense , if not what author would have meant. and then ,of course,normal strategy suggested by everyone. This thing helped me most to improve SC accuracy.
My question in the above SC is for "allowing" .. allowing companies to seek bla ba..
Precisely I am asking whether in the answer choice A , "allowing" should be considered as modifying "proliferation" that would be non-sensical though . SO this could be an another reason to destroy A . But I am not sure.
My 2 cents as well : Never do a single SC without using some normal logic/common sense.Think whether meaning makes sense , if not what author would have meant. and then ,of course,normal strategy suggested by everyone. This thing helped me most to improve SC accuracy.
Last edited by GMATMadeEasy on Sat Apr 30, 2011 12:46 pm, edited 1 time in total.
- catseye
- Junior | Next Rank: 30 Posts
- Posts: 22
- Joined: Tue Apr 12, 2011 6:50 am
- Thanked: 5 times
- Followed by:1 members
COMMA + VERB-ING:GMATMadeEasy wrote:The proliferation of so-called cybersquatters, people who register the Internet domain names of high-profile companies in hopes of reselling the rights to those names for a profit, led to passing the Anti-Cybersquatting Consumer Protection Act in 1999, allowing companies to seek up to $100,000 in damages against those who register domain names with the sole intent of selling them later.
(A) passing the Anti-Cybersquatting Consumer Protection Act in 1999, allowing companies to seek up to $100,000 in damages against those who register domain names with the sole intent of selling
(B) the passage of the Anti-Cybersquatting Consumer Protection Act in 1999, which allows companies to seek up to $100,000 in damages against those who register domain names with the sole intent that they will sell
(C) the passage in 1999 of the Anti-Cybersquatting Consumer Protection Act, which allows companies to seek up to $100,000 in damages against those who register domain names with the sole intent of selling
(D) the Anti-Cybersquatting Consumer Protection Act, which was passed in 1999, and it allows companies to seek up to $100,000 in damages against those who register domain names with the sole intent to sell
(E) the Anti-Cybersquatting Consumer Protection Act, passed in 1999 and allowing companies to seek up to $100,000 in damages against those who register domain names with the sole intent of
OA is C.
Question: In an answer choice A, I agree that it uses incorrect idiom "led to passing" but i want to know whether the usage of "allowing" after comma is correct ? I understand that it (allowing) modifies complete preceding clause but I want to know whether it should ALWAYS be applicable to the preceding clause's subject as well ?
COMMA + VERB-ING performs the following two functions:
1. It modifies the entire preceding clause.
2. It works as the verb of the subject of the preceding clause.
Now test the "COMMA+VERB-ING".
1. COMMA + Allowing: has a clause before it. test one passed.
2. The subject of the preceding clause is "proliferation". Now test.
Proliferation allows......... Does it make sense? Nope. Test two failed.
Conclusion: COMMA + ALLOWING is not correct in this sentence.
COMMA + Which:
Which refers to the NOUN immediately before COMMA. B is out.
In the option C, we have the following skeleton:
The proliferation led to the act, and it allows.
--> It refers to "the proliferation". It changes the intended meaning of the sentence.
The option E has two major problems:
1. The proliferation led to the ACT.
2. Passed and allowing are not parallel.
Answer is thus C.
Every dog has its day.
-
- Legendary Member
- Posts: 1112
- Joined: Sat Feb 26, 2011 11:16 am
- Thanked: 77 times
- Followed by:49 members
Thanks for your genuine advice bro, i will take care of that...thanksGMATMadeEasy wrote:@atulmangal: Thanks. yeah , about including I am aware of. Infact, if you look at the meaning of the word 'include', it is apparent that how it can play a role of modifying whole clause.
My question in the above SC is for "allowing" .. allowing companies to seek bla ba..
Precisely I am asking whether in the answer choice A , "allowing" should be considered as modifying "proliferation" that would be non-sensical though . SO this could be an another reason to destroy A . But I am not sure.
My 2 cents as well : Never do a single SC without using some normal logic/common sense.Think whether meaning makes sense , if not what author would have meant. and then ,of course,normal strategy suggested by everyone. This thing helped me most to improve SC accuracy.
-
- Legendary Member
- Posts: 768
- Joined: Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:46 am
- Thanked: 21 times
- Followed by:7 members
- GMATGuruNY
- GMAT Instructor
- Posts: 15539
- Joined: Tue May 25, 2010 12:04 pm
- Location: New York, NY
- Thanked: 13060 times
- Followed by:1906 members
- GMAT Score:790
I've amended answer choice E, which was not correctly reproduced in the original post.GMATMadeEasy wrote:The proliferation of so-called cybersquatters, people who register the Internet
domain names of high-profile companies in hopes of reselling the rights to those names for a profit, led to passing the Anti-Cybersquatting Consumer Protection Act in 1999, allowing companies to seek up to $100,000 in damages against those who register domain names with the sole intent of selling them later.
(A) passing the Anti-Cybersquatting Consumer Protection Act in 1999, allowing companies to seek up to $100,000 in damages against those who register domain names with the sole intent of selling
(B) the passage of the Anti-Cybersquatting Consumer Protection Act in 1999, which allows companies to seek up to $100,000 in damages against those who register domain names with the sole intent that they will sell
(C) the passage in 1999 of the Anti-Cybersquatting Consumer Protection Act, which allows companies to seek up to $100,000 in damages against those who register domain names with the sole intent of selling
(D) the Anti-Cybersquatting Consumer Protection Act, which was passed in 1999, and it allows companies to seek up to $100,000 in damages against those who register domain names with the sole intent to sell
(E) the Anti-Cybersquatting Consumer Protection Act, passed in 1999 and allowing companies to seek up to $100,000 in damages against those who register domain names with the sole intent that they will sell
OA is C.
Question: In an answer choice A, I agree that it uses incorrect idiom "led to passing" but i want to know whether the usage of "allowing" after comma is correct ? I understand that it (allowing) modifies complete preceding clause but I want to know whether it should ALWAYS be applicable to the preceding clause's subject as well ?
In A, the function of allowing is unclear. If allowing is a modifier, what exactly is it modifying? Is allowing the direct object of led (the proliferation led to passing...allowing)? Eliminate A.
In B and E, they does not have a clear antecedent. Eliminate B and E.
In D, the pronoun it serves no purpose: the sentence should read which was passed in 1999 and allows. Eliminate D.
The correct answer is C.
Last edited by GMATGuruNY on Mon May 02, 2011 4:11 am, edited 2 times in total.
Private tutor exclusively for the GMAT and GRE, with over 20 years of experience.
Followed here and elsewhere by over 1900 test-takers.
I have worked with students based in the US, Australia, Taiwan, China, Tajikistan, Kuwait, Saudi Arabia -- a long list of countries.
My students have been admitted to HBS, CBS, Tuck, Yale, Stern, Fuqua -- a long list of top programs.
As a tutor, I don't simply teach you how I would approach problems.
I unlock the best way for YOU to solve problems.
For more information, please email me (Mitch Hunt) at [email protected].
Student Review #1
Student Review #2
Student Review #3
Followed here and elsewhere by over 1900 test-takers.
I have worked with students based in the US, Australia, Taiwan, China, Tajikistan, Kuwait, Saudi Arabia -- a long list of countries.
My students have been admitted to HBS, CBS, Tuck, Yale, Stern, Fuqua -- a long list of top programs.
As a tutor, I don't simply teach you how I would approach problems.
I unlock the best way for YOU to solve problems.
For more information, please email me (Mitch Hunt) at [email protected].
Student Review #1
Student Review #2
Student Review #3
- force5
- Legendary Member
- Posts: 582
- Joined: Tue Mar 08, 2011 12:48 am
- Thanked: 61 times
- Followed by:6 members
- GMAT Score:740
can someone please suggest?
In C- is this construct correct?
the passage in 1999 of the Anti-Cybersquatting Consumer Protection Act
don't you think "in 1999" is incorrect modifier here, "the passage" should be of "the act"..
it should either be- the passage,in 1999, of the anti.....
or
in 1999, the passage.....
or
the passage of the act in 1999.....
In C- is this construct correct?
the passage in 1999 of the Anti-Cybersquatting Consumer Protection Act
don't you think "in 1999" is incorrect modifier here, "the passage" should be of "the act"..
it should either be- the passage,in 1999, of the anti.....
or
in 1999, the passage.....
or
the passage of the act in 1999.....
- EducationAisle
- Master | Next Rank: 500 Posts
- Posts: 434
- Joined: Sat Mar 27, 2010 10:42 pm
- Location: Bangalore, India
- Thanked: 91 times
- Followed by:46 members
At the risk of nitpicking, I would have to correct that 'passed' and 'allowing' are grammatically parallel (both are participles). There are other reasons why E is incorrect, as pointed out by fellow posters.catseye wrote: The option E has two major problems:
1. The proliferation led to the ACT.
2. Passed and allowing are not parallel.
Ashish
MBA - ISB, GMAT - 99th Percentile
GMAT Faculty @ EducationAisle
www.EducationAisle.com
Sentence Correction Nirvana available at:
a) Amazon: Sentence Correction Nirvana
b) Flipkart: Sentence Correction Nirvana
Now! Preview the entire Grammar Section of Sentence Correction Nirvana at pothi
MBA - ISB, GMAT - 99th Percentile
GMAT Faculty @ EducationAisle
www.EducationAisle.com
Sentence Correction Nirvana available at:
a) Amazon: Sentence Correction Nirvana
b) Flipkart: Sentence Correction Nirvana
Now! Preview the entire Grammar Section of Sentence Correction Nirvana at pothi
GMAT/MBA Expert
- lunarpower
- GMAT Instructor
- Posts: 3380
- Joined: Mon Mar 03, 2008 1:20 am
- Thanked: 2256 times
- Followed by:1535 members
- GMAT Score:800
that is generally how those modifiers work, yes. so that modifier is incorrect for the reason you've cited.GMATMadeEasy wrote:Question: In an answer choice A, I agree that it uses incorrect idiom "led to passing" but i want to know whether the usage of "allowing" after comma is correct ? I understand that it (allowing) modifies complete preceding clause but I want to know whether it should ALWAYS be applicable to the preceding clause's subject as well ?
on the other hand, as usual, the "always" (in all caps, no less) doesn't hold -- there are exceptions, including "including":
https://www.beatthegmat.com/stone-age-t36393.html#296165
https://www.beatthegmat.com/the-principa ... tml#307326
Ron has been teaching various standardized tests for 20 years.
--
Pueden hacerle preguntas a Ron en castellano
Potete chiedere domande a Ron in italiano
On peut poser des questions à Ron en français
Voit esittää kysymyksiä Ron:lle myös suomeksi
--
Quand on se sent bien dans un vêtement, tout peut arriver. Un bon vêtement, c'est un passeport pour le bonheur.
Yves Saint-Laurent
--
Learn more about ron
--
Pueden hacerle preguntas a Ron en castellano
Potete chiedere domande a Ron in italiano
On peut poser des questions à Ron en français
Voit esittää kysymyksiä Ron:lle myös suomeksi
--
Quand on se sent bien dans un vêtement, tout peut arriver. Un bon vêtement, c'est un passeport pour le bonheur.
Yves Saint-Laurent
--
Learn more about ron
-
- Legendary Member
- Posts: 768
- Joined: Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:46 am
- Thanked: 21 times
- Followed by:7 members
@lunarpower:
Thank you for your help. This has cleared a long lasting doubt.
Thanks. I really wanted to be sure of that.that is generally how those modifiers work, yes. so that modifier is incorrect for the reason you've cited.
yeah, i highlighted to really communicate my intentions to be sure of it.on the other hand, as usual, the "always" (in all caps, no less) doesn't hold -- there are exceptions
Thank you for your help. This has cleared a long lasting doubt.
GMAT/MBA Expert
- lunarpower
- GMAT Instructor
- Posts: 3380
- Joined: Mon Mar 03, 2008 1:20 am
- Thanked: 2256 times
- Followed by:1535 members
- GMAT Score:800
because this problem presents a split between "passing" and "passage", it is covered by the following principle:ranjeet75 wrote:Why "led to passing" is an incorrect idiom?
Please guide me as I could not find the reason.
https://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/pos ... tml#p50089
Ron has been teaching various standardized tests for 20 years.
--
Pueden hacerle preguntas a Ron en castellano
Potete chiedere domande a Ron in italiano
On peut poser des questions à Ron en français
Voit esittää kysymyksiä Ron:lle myös suomeksi
--
Quand on se sent bien dans un vêtement, tout peut arriver. Un bon vêtement, c'est un passeport pour le bonheur.
Yves Saint-Laurent
--
Learn more about ron
--
Pueden hacerle preguntas a Ron en castellano
Potete chiedere domande a Ron in italiano
On peut poser des questions à Ron en français
Voit esittää kysymyksiä Ron:lle myös suomeksi
--
Quand on se sent bien dans un vêtement, tout peut arriver. Un bon vêtement, c'est un passeport pour le bonheur.
Yves Saint-Laurent
--
Learn more about ron