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Can some one explain choice D? Do you think D has some problems? I am not really sure if the helped the shaping of is correct.
Thanks in advance!

by Crystal W

Sun Jun 12, 2016 11:30 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Margaret Mead
Replies: 21
Views: 12305

I'm just NOT able to understand clearly that how the NOUN + MODIFIER structure (=coffee these doctors drank) in the first clause is maintained in the OA ? How EXACTLY we're relating this structure with the second clause (= was their likelihood ) in the OA ? The more coffee these doctors drink , the...

by Crystal W

Fri Jun 10, 2016 7:19 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: A long-term study of some 1,000 physicians indicates that
Replies: 25
Views: 15034

From studies of the bony house of the brain, which is the cranium, located in the back of the skull, come what scientists know about dinosaur brains. (A) From studies of the bony house of the brain, which is the cranium, located in the back of the skull, come what scientists know about dinosaur bra...

by Crystal W

Fri Jun 10, 2016 5:59 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Bony house!
Replies: 20
Views: 8274

Advertising by mail has become much less effective, with fewer consumers responding. Because consumers are increasingly overwhelmed by the sheer amount of junk mail they receive, most discard almost all otters without considering them. Thus. an effective way tor corporations to improve response rat...

by Crystal W

Fri Jun 10, 2016 5:46 am
Forum: Critical Reasoning
Topic: 2016 OG CR 60
Replies: 2
Views: 4115

2016 OG CR 60

Advertising by mail has become much less effective, with fewer consumers responding. Because consumers are increasingly overwhelmed by the sheer amount of junk mail they receive, most discard almost all otters without considering them. Thus. an effective way tor corporations to improve response rate...

by Crystal W

Thu Jun 09, 2016 11:28 pm
Forum: Critical Reasoning
Topic: 2016 OG CR 60
Replies: 2
Views: 4115

My question is about choice B. I do not think it has problem. in 1959 is a prep phrase to express time and it can be placed anywhere. Can someone explain this one? Thanks in advance! B: In 1959 "A Raisin in the Sun"...won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award and was later made into ...

by Crystal W

Wed Jun 08, 2016 1:36 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: The first commercially successful drama
Replies: 4
Views: 3432

Can you explain more about choices B, C, and E? About the choice C, I think the subject is the knowledge and the main verb is come and it should be comes . Am I correct? About choice E, I think the reference of it is not clear and the meaning of sentence is repeat. Am I correct? Thanks in advance!

by Crystal W

Wed Jun 08, 2016 1:15 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Bony house!
Replies: 20
Views: 8274

I think in original sentence, it lacks subject. Or this is a inverted sentence, but why? Can you explain more? The original sentence is indeed inverted, with the main verb preceding the main subject. A: From studies...come what scientists know . Here, the subject of come (plural) is what scientists...

by Crystal W

Wed Jun 08, 2016 12:55 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Bony house!
Replies: 20
Views: 8274

2016 OG CR 33

Which of the following most logically completes the argument below? Although the number of large artificial satellites orbiting the Earth is small compared to the number of small pieces of debris in orbit, the large satellites interfere more seriously with telescope observations because of the stron...

by Crystal W

Mon Jun 06, 2016 1:01 am
Forum: Critical Reasoning
Topic: 2016 OG CR 33
Replies: 1
Views: 1723

Ozone, a special form of oxygen that screens out harmful ultraviolet rays, reaches high concentrations twelve miles above Earth, where it has long appeared that it was immune from human influence; we have now realized, though, that emissions of industrial chlorofluorocarbons deplete the ozone layer...

by Crystal W

Tue May 31, 2016 5:08 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Ozone
Replies: 19
Views: 7767

Sentence Structure Clause (1) From studies of the bony house of the brain, Clause (2) which is the cranium, located in the back of the skull, Clause (1) come what scientists know about dinosaur brains. Error 1: SV Number error. Note that the order of appearance of SV in clause 1 is reversed. Clause...

by Crystal W

Tue May 31, 2016 4:43 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Bony house!
Replies: 20
Views: 8274

The first commercially successful drama

The first commercially successful drama to depict Black family life sympathetically and the first play by a Black woman to be produced on Broadway, it was Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun that won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and was later made into both a film and a...

by Crystal W

Mon May 30, 2016 10:48 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: The first commercially successful drama
Replies: 4
Views: 3432

In California today,

In California today, Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more than 43 percent, compared with a decade ago, when it was about 35 percent. A.In California today, Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more than 43 percent, compared with a decade ago, when it was about 35 percent. ...

by Crystal W

Mon May 30, 2016 6:49 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: In California today,
Replies: 1
Views: 1787

IN the mid-1920s the Hawthorne Works of the Western Electric Company was the scene of an intensive series of experiments that would investigate changes in working conditions as to their effects on workers' performance. a) that would investigate changes in working conditions as to their effects on w...

by Crystal W

Mon May 30, 2016 5:35 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: In the mid-1920s the Hawthorne Works of the Western Electric
Replies: 26
Views: 13949

Thank you for you explanation, but can you explainmore about choice A? I know the mistake about they in choice A, but do you think A should omit do or put do after livestock, because the do refers to have? Thanks in advance! I think it's actually strange that the answer explanation cited the "...

by Crystal W

Sat May 28, 2016 6:59 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: OG 2016 SC 111
Replies: 6
Views: 2915