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Argument – The following appeared as a part of an article in a magazine devoted to regional life: “ Corporations should should look to the city of Helios when seeking new business opportunities or a new location. Even in the recent recession, Helio’s unemployment rate was lower than the region...

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Argument – The following appeared in a report presented for discussion at a meeting of the directors of a company that manufactures parts for heavy machinery – “The falling revenues that the company is experiencing coincide with delays in manufacturing. These delays, in turn are due in large p...

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GMAT AWA Essay - Feedback required

Hi All, Please provide your feedback on the essay below - Argument- The following appeared in a memorandum issued by a large city’s council on the arts: “In a recent city wide poll, 15 percent more residents said that they watch television programs about the visual arts than was the case in a po...

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Hi All, Below is my second essay. Please provide me with you feedback :) Argument - The following appeared as part of an annual report sent to stockholders by Olympic Foods, a processor of frozen foods: “Over time, the costs of processing go down because as organizations learn how to do things bet...

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Hi All, I plan to take GMAT in the next 3 months and I have been practicing AWA from OG2015. I am uploading my first practice essays below. Please provide me with your feedback and improvement points. Thanks ! 1. Argument – The following appeared in a memorandum from the business department of the...