No matter how patiently they explain their reasons for confiscating certain items, travelers often treat customs inspectors like wanton poachers rather than government employees.
(A) travelers often treat customs inspectors like wanton poachers rather than government employees
(B) travelers often treat customs inspectors as wanton poachers instead of government employees
(C) travelers often treat customs inspectors as if they were not government employees but wanton poachers
(D) customs inspectors are often treated by travelers as if they were wanton poachers rather than government employees
(e)customs inspectors are often treated not like government employees but wanton poachers by travelers
Why D and not E? Please explain.
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To maintain parallelism, not like X but Y should be either "not like X but like Y" or "not X but Y". Moreover, "like" doesn't seem correct here. "treated as" seems correct.
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E is the best,
A,B, C should be eliminated, misplace modifier
E is better than D ( in D, "they" is awkward)
A,B, C should be eliminated, misplace modifier
E is better than D ( in D, "they" is awkward)
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My choice D
E --> Like is used for comparison. Here it means as if the comparison is done between the treatment given to government employees vs treatment given to customs inspectors.
A,B,C gone due to incorrect modifier.
E --> Like is used for comparison. Here it means as if the comparison is done between the treatment given to government employees vs treatment given to customs inspectors.
A,B,C gone due to incorrect modifier.
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I go with D.
Cross off A,B,C misplaced modifier.
No matter how patiently they explain their reasons for confiscating certain items >>> modifies custom inspectors not the travelers
E is awkward.
Cross off A,B,C misplaced modifier.
No matter how patiently they explain their reasons for confiscating certain items >>> modifies custom inspectors not the travelers
E is awkward.
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"No matter how patiently they explain their reasons for confiscating certain items"thegmatbeater wrote:I couldnt find the mistake with C?
who confiscated certain items... was it the travellers or was it the customs guy??
this is a 2-3 pattern , where in A B and C can be kicked off rightaway!
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