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by f2001290 » Wed May 02, 2007 12:31 am
No matter how patiently they explain their reasons for confiscating certain items, travelers often treat customs inspectors like wanton poachers rather than government employees.

(A) travelers often treat customs inspectors like wanton poachers rather than government employees
(B) travelers often treat customs inspectors as wanton poachers instead of government employees
(C) travelers often treat customs inspectors as if they were not government employees but wanton poachers
(D) customs inspectors are often treated by travelers as if they were wanton poachers rather than government employees
(e)customs inspectors are often treated not like government employees but wanton poachers by travelers

Why D and not E? Please explain.

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by RAGS » Wed May 02, 2007 9:10 am
The not like x but y seems un-idomatic
D seems good
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by rajesh_ctm » Wed May 02, 2007 7:45 pm
To maintain parallelism, not like X but Y should be either "not like X but like Y" or "not X but Y". Moreover, "like" doesn't seem correct here. "treated as" seems correct.

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by OilBaron » Mon May 07, 2007 2:57 pm
I think you've also got a dangling modifier here that makes the sentence awkward. E is also un-idiomatic, which was stated earlier.

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by thegmatbeater » Tue Aug 12, 2008 3:13 pm
I couldnt find the mistake with C?

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by NSNguyen » Thu Aug 14, 2008 7:40 am
E is the best,
A,B, C should be eliminated, misplace modifier
E is better than D ( in D, "they" is awkward)
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by anju » Thu Aug 14, 2008 8:37 am
I guess D is correct - but the reference of they is unclear
E - incorrect idiom - Not like X but like Y or Not X byt Y...

What's the OA and why?

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by mksreeram » Thu Aug 14, 2008 10:33 am
My choice D

E --> Like is used for comparison. Here it means as if the comparison is done between the treatment given to government employees vs treatment given to customs inspectors.

A,B,C gone due to incorrect modifier.

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by bie.freelance » Tue Aug 19, 2008 1:34 am
I go with D.

Cross off A,B,C misplaced modifier.

No matter how patiently they explain their reasons for confiscating certain items >>> modifies custom inspectors not the travelers

E is awkward.

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by arora007 » Sat Jul 24, 2010 4:28 am
thegmatbeater wrote:I couldnt find the mistake with C?
"No matter how patiently they explain their reasons for confiscating certain items"

who confiscated certain items... was it the travellers or was it the customs guy??

this is a 2-3 pattern , where in A B and C can be kicked off rightaway!
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