With so much public scrutiny of politicians' private lives, many aspiring lawmakers are dissuaded from seeking office because the exposing of their past indiscretions to the public would prove embarrassing
A.
B. of past indiscretions exposed to the public proving embarrassing
C. past indiscretions, if they were exposed to the public, would prove to be embarrassing
D. their past indiscretions would prove embarrassing if exposed to the public
E. it would prove embarrassing if their past indiscretions had been exposed to the public
Would anyone explain why OA- [spoiler][D][/spoiler] beats my choice [spoiler][C][/spoiler]? Thanks
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jyotiistalking, I agree with you that 'they' in C is ambiguous. Also C only refers to "past indiscretions" without making clear that the issue is *their* past indiscretions -- they could be anybody's past indiscretions. And D just sounds tighter and smoother. It has a better rhythm, and "prove embarrassing" doesn't have the unnecessary "to be".
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