I have a simple doubt in explanation choice C: OG says in the opening phrase, reception needs to modify BM's work rather than the whole clause. I don't understand why a 'reception' a noun needs to modify the subject of the following clause (it isn't a verb-ing or verb-ed modifier)
Below is the sentence structure:
After long years of indifferent reception by SC, Barbara's work xxxxxxxxx
To me the blue part seems like a prep phrase which should modify the whole following clause not just the subject of the following clause.
Please correct my understanding here. Thanks
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Reception here is acting as a verb and not a noun.
Coming to the sentence,
"After long years of indifferent reception by SC" has to be followed by the thing that has been indifferently received. The answer is the work of Barbara. The work of Barbara has to immediately follow the comma. This happens only in A and B.
Since B has other grammatical errors, A is the correct option.
Coming to the sentence,
"After long years of indifferent reception by SC" has to be followed by the thing that has been indifferently received. The answer is the work of Barbara. The work of Barbara has to immediately follow the comma. This happens only in A and B.
Since B has other grammatical errors, A is the correct option.
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I doubt reception can ever act as a verb. It is a noun. check here: https://www.thefreedictionary.com/reception
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After long years of indifferent reception by the scientific community, Barbara McClintock's subtle work on the genetics of corn has now been acknowledged to be of major importance.sui generis wrote:I have a simple doubt in explanation choice C: OG says in the opening phrase, reception needs to modify BM's work rather than the whole clause. I don't understand why a 'reception' a noun needs to modify the subject of the following clause (it isn't a verb-ing or verb-ed modifier)
Below is the sentence structure:
After long years of indifferent reception by SC, Barbara's work xxxxxxxxx
To me the blue part seems like a prep phrase which should modify the whole following clause not just the subject of the following clause.
Please correct my understanding here. Thanks
Here, the modifier in red serves primarily as an adverb, providing context for HOW Barbara McClintock's work HAS NOW BEEN ACKNOWLEDGED.
Under what circumstances HAS Barbara McClintock's work now BEEN ACKNOWLEDGED?
It has been acknowledged AFTER LONG YEARS OF INDIFFERENT RECEPTION.
Nonetheless, at the same time the modifier provides information about the SUBJECT of the following clause, since it was Barbara McClintock's WORK that suffered LONG YEARS OF INDIFFERENT RECEPTiON.
It is for this reason that the subject of the following clause must be what suffered long years of indifferent reception: Barbara McClintock's work.
Since the modifier in red provides information about both the subject and the verb of the following clause, it can be said to modify the ENTIRE CLAUSE.
Please note that reception is a NOUN.
Here, it serves as the object of the preposition of.
After long years of WHAT?
After long years of INDIFFERENT RECEPTION.
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Thanks for the elaborative explanation Mitch.
I understand the opening prep phrase, besides modifying the entire clause, needs an immediate subject to modify but is it a necessary condition ?
Had choice C been idiomatically correct would it be the correct answer in absence of choice A ?
As reading the explanation for choice C that the GMAT quotes confuses me - 'reception' needs to modify the specific subject rather than the whole clause.
I understand the opening prep phrase, besides modifying the entire clause, needs an immediate subject to modify but is it a necessary condition ?
Had choice C been idiomatically correct would it be the correct answer in absence of choice A ?
As reading the explanation for choice C that the GMAT quotes confuses me - 'reception' needs to modify the specific subject rather than the whole clause.
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I think Mitch did a nice explanation. Here's my way to look at this:sui generis wrote:Thanks for the elaborative explanation Mitch.
I understand the opening prep phrase, besides modifying the entire clause, needs an immediate subject to modify but is it a necessary condition ?
Had choice C been idiomatically correct would it be the correct answer in absence of choice A ?
As reading the explanation for choice C that the GMAT quotes confuses me - 'reception' needs to modify the specific subject rather than the whole clause.
The opening adverbial modifier should:
1. modify the whole sentence
and
2. apply to the subject of the sentence
Check out Question #113 in the Verbal Review 2nd. The original sentence is:
In A.D. 391, resulting from the destruction of the largest library of the ancient world at Alexandria, later generations lost all but lliad and odyssey among Greek epics, most of the poetry of Pindar and Sappho, and dozens of plays by Aeschylus and Euripides.
This choice (A) is wrong. Although you can construe "resulting from ..." as to modify the whole sentence, it does not apply to the subject - it's nonsense to say "later generations" were "resulting from ...".
Same deals here. The opening modifier must apply to the subject. If the subject were not "Barbara's work", it would be unclear WHAT "indifferent reception" refers to.