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First time AWA - argument

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First time AWA - argument

by Balrog1978 » Fri Dec 24, 2010 11:04 am
This is the first time ive attempted an AWA argument question. Please let me know whether my approach is sound or I whether I could do better?


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by Psychodementia » Wed Dec 29, 2010 10:15 pm
I liked that:

1. You stuck to a template

2. Were short and crisp

I wished that:

1. You write without using too many jargons (at somepoint I had to re-read)

2. In the penultimate paragraph giving data points that could have helped strengthen the argument.