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by ST » Sun Aug 09, 2009 5:51 pm
could someone please explain this?
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by riteshbindal » Sun Aug 09, 2009 6:03 pm
There is no mistake in this sentence. Let's have a look at the options:
B --> "following and his envisioning" changes the meaning of sentence.
C --> "after Robert" changes the meaning.
D --> from Robert..forward changes the meaning
E --> "his own envisioning" changes the meaning.

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by ST » Mon Aug 10, 2009 5:28 am
Thank you

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by goelmohit2002 » Tue Aug 11, 2009 2:38 am
IMO critique Vs critquing....since we need to tell about the noun that immediately precedes the modifier...so critique....

B and C breaks parallelism....so only A left.