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Thank you for the explanation, Jen. Could you please throw some light on answer choice as to why there is no parallelism, because, I couldn't find an error in it.Jen@Knewton wrote:The antecedent of "it" in choice C is "the sight" -- this is the only logical antecedent here, so the pronoun use is fine. There can be multiple potential grammatical antecedents for a pronoun, but if only one is logical then the usage is correct. But C still has the other issues that I mentioned above.
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- Emphasis is lostpzazz12 wrote:After arduous months of fighting, the sight of the white flag being raised generated as much relief on the victor's side than it did on the vanquished.
A. as much relief on the victor's side than it did on the vanquished.-- As mush as
B. as much relief among the victors as among the vanquished. -- my choice
C. as much relief on the victor's side as it did on the vanquished's. - Avoid apostrophes
D. relief both on the victor's side as well as on the vanquished's. - Emphasis is lost
E. relief both for the victor and the vanquished side.
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The usage is "as...as", hence, I eliminated A, D, and E upon reviewing the choices. Between B and C, I considered 2 things, a) does the possessive make sense in C and b) which of the two is the most concise approach. As had been previously mentioned, it makes much more sense for a person to feel relief than for a side to feel relief; and even if C were grammatically correct, B would still be the more concise choice of the two.pzazz12 wrote:After arduous months of fighting, the sight of the white flag being raised generated as much relief on the victor's side than it did on the vanquished.
A. as much relief on the victor's side than it did on the vanquished.
B. as much relief among the victors as among the vanquished.
C. as much relief on the victor's side as it did on the vanquished's.
D. relief both on the victor's side as well as on the vanquished's.
E. relief both for the victor and the vanquished side.
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Really a good question. I think in Option C ,, the use of "did" is wrong as there is no verb in the first part.
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Hi vinitkhicha,
You are correct. It's a subtle addition, but the usage of the word "did" creates a parallelism problem, so answer C is incorrect.
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You are correct. It's a subtle addition, but the usage of the word "did" creates a parallelism problem, so answer C is incorrect.
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After arduous months of fighting, the sight of the white flag being raised generated as much relief on the victor's side than it did on the vanquished.
(A) as much relief on the victor's side than it did on the vanquished.
(B) as much relief among the victors as among the vanquished.
(C) as much relief on the victor's side as it did on the vanquished's.
(D) relief both on the victor's side as well as on the vanquished's.
(E) relief both for the victor and the vanquished side.
IMO: B
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(A) as much relief on the victor's side than it did on the vanquished.
(B) as much relief among the victors as among the vanquished.
(C) as much relief on the victor's side as it did on the vanquished's.
(D) relief both on the victor's side as well as on the vanquished's.
(E) relief both for the victor and the vanquished side.
IMO: B
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