Based on the recent decline in enrollment, the admission office decided to reevaluate its recruitment strategies.
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i believe thats a misplaced modifier; should be
Basing their decision on the recent decline in enrollment, the admission office decided to reevaluate its recruitment strategies.
i believe that's better, but i could be wrong.
Basing their decision on the recent decline in enrollment, the admission office decided to reevaluate its recruitment strategies.
i believe that's better, but i could be wrong.
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I don't think you can use THEIR because admission office is singular. (its)mberkowitz wrote:i believe thats a misplaced modifier; should be
Basing their decision on the recent decline in enrollment, the admission office decided to reevaluate its recruitment strategies.
i believe that's better, but i could be wrong.
And the second half of the sentence is in past tense, using a participle , basing, changes the meaning.
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Good catch but I need some explanations.srisl11 wrote:Is to correct to begin a sentence using 'Based on...' ?
I'm not sure. Please correct me .
I think the sentence should be...."Because of recent decline..."
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refer OG11 Q20 pg 640, it is almost the same question.
Hope this helps.
Hope this helps.
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Awesome!parallel_chase wrote:refer OG11 Q20 pg 640, it is almost the same question.
Hope this helps.
the admission office is not based! I see!
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