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Candidate: Our city's students have suffered long enough. Over the mayor's four years in office, our district's math and science scores have hovered well below the national average, even while our average teacher's salary has increased. Our student-per-class ratio is laughable, yet he has made no pr...
- by michaelklee
Sat Apr 22, 2017 11:58 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
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Please read/rate my AWA essay
Hello GMAT experts! I preparing for my GMAT and it's quite a ways away, however I could use all the help I can to get the best score possible. I am open to all constructive feedback, suggestions, thoughts, opinions, and anything else that might help me write a better essay. Thank you! -Mike ========...
- by michaelklee
Sun Mar 12, 2017 5:52 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please read/rate my AWA essay
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The overall organization of your paragraphs transitioned well and your justification why the prompt is flawed are great, however the diction used is very basic. Try reading articles like The Economist because they have great examples of writing, for the most part. A good format to follow is: 1) Intr...
- by michaelklee
Wed Mar 08, 2017 1:43 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Rate my AWA
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