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Thank you so much for your advice. Looking back now I see that I could have been more direct in the intro. I do have one question for you if you don't mind. I take my GMAT next Saturday and since my studying has been varied at best I'm taking off work W-F to focus solely on that. On Friday I was pla...

by savannah.hooper

Sun Jul 19, 2015 12:48 pm
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: 1 week until GMAT. Please read & rate. Thank yoU!
Replies: 3
Views: 2109

1 week until GMAT. Please read & rate. Thank yoU!

The following appeared in a report to shareholders of Watchweek, a popular news magazine: Over the last few years, Watchweek has had trouble retaining employees, and few employees are being promoted to higher management positions from within the company. To improve employee retention and advancement...

by savannah.hooper

Sat Jul 18, 2015 8:39 am
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: 1 week until GMAT. Please read & rate. Thank yoU!
Replies: 3
Views: 2109

Thank you! I submitted it through the practice grading software and it gave it a 6. However, I just completed another one and it gave me a 5. :(

by savannah.hooper

Sat Jul 18, 2015 8:37 am
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: AWA PLEASE READ ONLY 2 WEEKS LEFT
Replies: 3
Views: 1899

AWA PLEASE READ ONLY 2 WEEKS LEFT

The following appeared in The Homebuilder magazine, a local publication with a focus on construction and sale of real-estate properties: “According to the most recent survey of our readers, nearly 70% of the respondents indicated that they are planning to build or purchase a new home over the next...

by savannah.hooper

Sat Jul 11, 2015 5:56 am
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: AWA PLEASE READ ONLY 2 WEEKS LEFT
Replies: 3
Views: 1899

Please review this!!!!! Thank you!

The following appeared in an Excelsior Company memorandum. The Excelsior Company plans to introduce its own brand of coffee. Since coffee is an expensive food item, and since there are already many established brands of coffee, the best way to gain customers for the Excelsior brand is to do what Sup...

by savannah.hooper

Sat Jun 27, 2015 8:02 am
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: Please review this!!!!! Thank you!
Replies: 1
Views: 1364

Hi Katharine, Thanks for your reply! I actually finished the essay early. I just wasn't really sure how much I was supposed to write on it, so I kept it short. I did have a hard time finding flaws in the argument that were large enough to base full paragraphs on. Any tips would be appreciated! Thank...

by savannah.hooper

Thu May 28, 2015 12:00 pm
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: AWA--Please Rate!
Replies: 3
Views: 1656

AWA--Please Rate!

Hi everyone! This was my first attempt at an AWA. Please let me know how I did. Thanks! Also, has anyone used the GMAT Write tool? Is it worth the $30 and how accurate is it? ESSAY QUESTION: The following appeared in a strategy memorandum of an investment company: “Over the past several years, inv...

by savannah.hooper

Tue May 26, 2015 4:48 pm
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: AWA--Please Rate!
Replies: 3
Views: 1656