Written in ink or engraved by stylus,

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by mittalashwani13 » Fri Jul 03, 2009 11:16 am
goelmohit2002 wrote:
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goelmohit2002 wrote:Can someone please tell what does the below highlighted "that" points to in D.

"D. is as vivid in its details of personal life as that gathered "

"That" is referring to the "historical account" ..
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Just one small doubt...

Can historical account be gathered....? This looks to be a bit awkward....or it is ok to use this ?
Yes, one can gather historical account. Pls follow the link for the definition of word "account"
https://dictionary.reference.com/browse/account

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by goelmohit2002 » Fri Jul 03, 2009 12:08 pm
Thanks.

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Re: Written in ink or engraved by stylus,

by El Cucu » Fri Jul 03, 2009 12:37 pm
ska7945 wrote:Written in ink or engraved by stylus, more than 2,000 letters and documents on wooden tablets excavated at the site of the old roman fort at vindolanda in northern England are yielding a historical account of the military garrison in the first and second centuries that are so vivid in their details about personal life as they are from Pompeii

A. are so vivid in their details about personal life as they ate
B. are as vivid in their details of personal life as those gathered
C. is as vivid in their detail about personal life as that gathered
D. is as vivid in its details of personal life as that gathered
E. is so vivid in its details of personal life as is that
Interesting SC, source pls? Tks

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by Kajiabeat » Thu Sep 09, 2010 6:16 am
Can any instructor explain the "that" in choices?

what does this"that" mean?? what are the both party of the comparison?

Eagerly waiting!

Thank you very much!

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by lunarpower » Tue Sep 14, 2010 5:35 am
Kajiabeat wrote:Can any instructor explain the "that" in choices?

what does this"that" mean?? what are the both party of the comparison?

Eagerly waiting!

Thank you very much!
good question. ick, this problem is ugly.
what's the source? does anybody know the original source of the problem?

i don't see a legitimate antecedent for "that", either. i think the authors are trying to write a sentence in which "that" stands for "historical account", but that doesn't make too much sense -- you can't really have a "historical account gathered" from somewhere. you can have artifacts/scrolls gathered from somewhere, and then a historical account based on those items, but the account itself isn't gathered.

still, it's possible to get down to choice (d) by pure grammar/idiom concerns:
* the subject of the first verb is "historical account", so you can eliminate (a) and (b), which have plural verbs;
* the correct idiom for equating two things in terms of extent is "as ADJ as...", not "so ADJ as...", so kill (e)
* the pronoun must also refer to the historical account, so "their" is wrong in (c)
this leaves (d).

still, an ugly problem. i'd like to know the source.
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by Cumulonimbus » Sat Jun 07, 2014 8:09 am
Hi Ron,

Source is GMAT PREP.
lunarpower wrote:
Kajiabeat wrote:Can any instructor explain the "that" in choices?

what does this"that" mean?? what are the both party of the comparison?

Eagerly waiting!

Thank you very much!
good question. ick, this problem is ugly.
what's the source? does anybody know the original source of the problem?

i don't see a legitimate antecedent for "that", either. i think the authors are trying to write a sentence in which "that" stands for "historical account", but that doesn't make too much sense -- you can't really have a "historical account gathered" from somewhere. you can have artifacts/scrolls gathered from somewhere, and then a historical account based on those items, but the account itself isn't gathered.

still, it's possible to get down to choice (d) by pure grammar/idiom concerns:
* the subject of the first verb is "historical account", so you can eliminate (a) and (b), which have plural verbs;
* the correct idiom for equating two things in terms of extent is "as ADJ as...", not "so ADJ as...", so kill (e)
* the pronoun must also refer to the historical account, so "their" is wrong in (c)
this leaves (d).

still, an ugly problem. i'd like to know the source.

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by [email protected] » Sun Jul 14, 2019 6:53 pm
Hi
"As X so Y" is the correct idiom can we use it always as a rule and in this context to eliminate option E.
I did not understand the negative connotation being talked about for usage of "so X as Y" (as in option E), I guess it will always be incorrect.
Kindly, shed some light.

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by vietnam47 » Tue Aug 06, 2019 12:09 am
that clause can refer to a far noun. this case is consider inferior and can be wrong if there is a better choice. but inhere, no better choice appear and the inferior case is correct.

this is simple thinking of inferior pattern but is important and give us confidence when we face inferior pattern.