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style/conscision

by BTGmoderatorRO » Sat Nov 04, 2017 2:25 am
The maternal copy of Nesp55 may encourage the miceto take more risks on behalf of the group, whether that risk involves looking for food,finding a nest, or defending the group.

(a) The maternal copy of Nesp55 may encourage the mice totake more risks on behalf of the group, whether that risk involves looking for food,finding a nest, or defending the group.
(b) Whether that risk involves looking for food, finding a nest, or acting in the defense of the group, the mice may be encouraged by the maternal copy of Nesp55 to take more risks on behalf of the group.
(c) The maternal copy of Nesp55 encourages mice to take more risks on behalf of the group, whether that risk involves looking for food, finding a nest, or the defense of the group.
(d) Whether looking for food, finding a nest, or defending the group, the maternal copy of Nesp55 may encourage the mice to take more risks on behalfof the group when doing such activities.
(e) The mice may be encouraged by the maternal copy of Nesp55 to take more risks on behalf of the group, whether that risk involves looking for food, finding a nest, or acting in the defense of the group.

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