Hi Admission Experts@mbaMission,
Do you provide any Analysis/assistance for the Essays for Ivey (Canada) and ESMT Berlin ?
It'd be great if you can get me any feedback on how to write the following two Essays from these two b-schools :
1. Ivey (Canada) : What is the most important issue that you've ever changed your mind about? (250 word limit)
2. ESMT Berlin : Imagine you have just finished your MBA. You have two months until your next career adventure is due to start and have decided to go on a cross-country automobile trip. You can afford to invite two fellow travelers. Who (can be people alive or historical figures) would you take with you and why? (1500 characters maximum)
BOTH the essays appear to be pretty unique.
Would much appreciate any feedback on them. . .Thanks in advance for your valuable time!
Seeking help on Essays for Ivey (Canada) and ESMT Berlin
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Hi there,
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For these types of creative essays, the 'why' is generally more important than the 'what'... so pick a direction, and then support it with plenty of thoughtful and reflective descriptions of why you've gone with your answers. The admissions committees really just want to get to know you better as a person with these types of questions.
Keep us posted if we can help further and good luck!
We certainly can help applicants with any such application essay through our services if you are interested:
https://www.mbamission.com/
We can also provide a free 30 minute consultation if that is of interest:
https://www.mbamission.com/consult/
Finally we have an Essay Writing guide that can be downloaded for free that you might find very helpful.
https://shop.mbamission.com/products/mb ... ting-guide
For these types of creative essays, the 'why' is generally more important than the 'what'... so pick a direction, and then support it with plenty of thoughtful and reflective descriptions of why you've gone with your answers. The admissions committees really just want to get to know you better as a person with these types of questions.
Keep us posted if we can help further and good luck!
Jennifer Kedrowski
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Hi Jennifer,mbaMissionJenK wrote:For these types of creative essays, the 'why' is generally more important than the 'what'... so pick a direction, and then support it with plenty of thoughtful and reflective descriptions of why you've gone with your answers. The admissions committees really just want to get to know you better as a person with these types of questions.
Thanks for your reply. But it'd be really helpful if you could elaborate a BIT more on the above...especially, the part in RED.
Look forward to your insightful feedback.
P.S: These are really creative/abstract topics. Not really getting much direction actually <i class="em em-smiley"></i>