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Please rate my argument essay, thank you!

Here is the argument that I wrote recently. Could you please have a look at it and give some some feedback to improve. Thank you very much. The following appeared as part of a letter to the editor of a local newspaper: “It makes no sense that in most places 15-year-olds are not eligible for their ...

by hhuizeng

Thu Jun 24, 2010 6:25 pm
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: Please rate my argument essay, thank you!
Replies: 2
Views: 1264

Please rate my issue essay, thank you!

Hello, I will have GMAT exam in one month and am preparing the AWA. I will appreciate a lot if you can have a look at the following essay and give me some feedback for improvement. "Of all the manifestations* of power, restraint in the use of that power impresses people most.� *manifestations: app...

by hhuizeng

Mon Jun 21, 2010 7:10 pm
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: Please rate my issue essay, thank you!
Replies: 0
Views: 743

Can some one help to explain the differences between premises and assumptions? Cause When I tried to use the template, I found it confused. I will appreciate your help. Thank you![/u]

by hhuizeng

Sun Jun 20, 2010 7:32 pm
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: Argument essay template, if anyone wants it
Replies: 113
Views: 444808