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Essay. Analysis of Issue. Will be glad for it to be reviewed

"Although the modern information age has opened up channels of communication that never before existed, it, paradoxically, has destroyed the foundation of community by isolating individuals in a technological world that involves little real human interaction." Discuss the extent to which y...


My 4th essay. Analysis of argument. Please review

The following appeared in a corporate memorandum of a beverage manufacturer: “Our promotional price reductions on energy drinks have been highly successful, as we have seen a dramatic increase in unit sales. Further, surveys of our consumers indicate that this promotion was favorably received by t...

by diveintogmat

Sat Dec 12, 2009 2:19 am
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: My 4th essay. Analysis of argument. Please review
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My second essay. please review.

ESSAY QUESTION: The following appeared in an article in a consumer-electronics magazine: "Company X's latest model of digital camera to be released next month, the TR12, is being promoted as the most portable, user-friendly digital camera available, and also an excellent bargain. It can be expe...

by diveintogmat

Tue Dec 08, 2009 3:42 pm
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: My second essay. please review.
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My third essay - 2 weeks left! Please review

ESSAY QUESTION: “Since no business can be all things at once, companies that specialize in one product or service are more efficient than those that offer a diverse product mix.� From your perspective, how accurate is the above statement? Support your position with reasons and/or examples from y...

by diveintogmat

Tue Dec 08, 2009 3:40 pm
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: My third essay - 2 weeks left! Please review
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My second AWA essay - 2 weeks for my GMAT. Please review.

ESSAY QUESTION: The following appeared in an article in a consumer-electronics magazine: "Company X's latest model of digital camera to be released next month, the TR12, is being promoted as the most portable, user-friendly digital camera available, and also an excellent bargain. It can be expe...


Hi Josh, Heartening to get one reply and with good feedback. I am finding it quite hard to write all I want to write in the essays within a span of 30 min on the practice tests, inspite of being a fast typist. Hope to improve in the next 2 weeks that I have before the test. thank you again. really. ...

by diveintogmat

Tue Dec 08, 2009 3:24 pm
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: GMAT in 2 weeks... please review my essay.. my first one!
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GMAT in 2 weeks... please review my essay.. my first one!

Will in future post all my essays on http://diveintogmat.blocked ESSAY QUESTION: The following appeared in the personal finance section of a popular magazine: “The average price of an acre of land in the United States is now 50 times what it was in 1970, and nearly 200 times what it was in 1920. T...

by diveintogmat

Sun Dec 06, 2009 1:08 am
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: GMAT in 2 weeks... please review my essay.. my first one!
Replies: 2
Views: 1644

My AWA essays

Dear All,

My GMAT is scheduled for the 22nd of December. I have just started my preparation, and just wrote my first essay! I am going to post all my essays on a blog -
http://diveintogmat.blocked/

Please review my essays and comment on them when you found time. Thank you

Dino

by diveintogmat

Sun Dec 06, 2009 1:06 am
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: My AWA essays
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Views: 1373