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"Parents should discipline sons as they would discipline daughters, is redundant, and wordy."


Parents should discipline sons as they would daughters is more concise. It's really not awkward because the second "discipline" is implied by the first.

by ssilver0210

Sun Mar 15, 2009 7:04 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Popular child psychologists
Replies: 14
Views: 4058

Choice E is awkwardly written. "As interests rates" does not not contain a verb, so we do not know what they have been doing, even though the sentence is trying to get across that the rates have been rising along with the consumer and producer prices. Choice B says "as have interest r...

by ssilver0210

Sun Mar 15, 2009 5:37 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Interest Rates
Replies: 5
Views: 1597

The mushrooms and root-like tentacles are extending. The and is unnecessary.

by ssilver0210

Sun Mar 15, 2009 5:32 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Oldest Organism
Replies: 2
Views: 1029

Answer is D. You need the word "since," and since the subject is plural, you'll need a plural pronoun, in this case "these."

by ssilver0210

Sun Mar 15, 2009 5:28 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Bottle-Nosed Dolphins
Replies: 4
Views: 2444

You want the simple past tense here of the verb "to be." The past tense of "to be" is "were." You would use the past perfect tense (had been) when stating that something had been happening before something else occurred. For example, Jim had been studying for three hour...

by ssilver0210

Sun Mar 15, 2009 5:25 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Quasars
Replies: 2
Views: 1094

Think of it this way: Which sounds better: Jim studied twice as much as John to prepare for the GMAT. or Jim studied twice as much than John to prepare for the GMAT. The first one is the idiomatic expression, and therefore the correct answer. In other words, just remember "as much as," and...

by ssilver0210

Sun Mar 15, 2009 5:14 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Correct Idiom for comparing multiple items??
Replies: 4
Views: 2152

The key here is to understand that you are looking for a plural pronoun to replace the plural noun "barges." That eliminates A, C, D.

E provides an improper verb tense, so B is the correct response.

by ssilver0210

Sun Mar 15, 2009 1:38 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Restoring fishing grounds
Replies: 12
Views: 2934

In these kinds of questions, it would be helpful if you would state which answer you chose and why. Then the response can clearly state where you went wrong with your answer choice, as well as pinpoint the grammatical error.

by ssilver0210

Sun Mar 15, 2009 1:34 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Most Significant Medical Breakthrough
Replies: 9
Views: 3879

This is tricky. The reason why E is preferred over D, is because the world discipline is already stated in the earlier portion of the sentence, so to state it again would be redundant. In other words, "as they would daughters," implies "as they would discipline daughters." It's m...

by ssilver0210

Sun Mar 15, 2009 1:30 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Popular child psychologists
Replies: 14
Views: 4058

Keep in mind here that it is the industry that was prospering, not the companies.

It is the companies that have experienced a sharp drop in sales.

So, answer is C because both "was" and "have" are correct within the sentence.

by ssilver0210

Sun Mar 15, 2009 1:26 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Pollution Control Industry
Replies: 5
Views: 1667

I would say choice B here is correct. Focus on the conclusion. It states that it is impossible to evaluate the claims made by meteorologists that a mathematically accurate model of the atmosphere will lead to greater precision in weather forecasting. Choice B says that significant gains in the accur...

by ssilver0210

Sun Mar 15, 2009 1:14 pm
Forum: Critical Reasoning
Topic: Weather Forecast = Mathematical Model
Replies: 6
Views: 4559

The answer is E. If it were impossible to classify a marketing decision as either right or wrong, then the the president of the firm would not have been warranted in concluding that half of the decisions were wrong. For her to make that determination, she had to have had the ability first to classif...

by ssilver0210

Sun Mar 15, 2009 12:55 pm
Forum: Critical Reasoning
Topic: Presupposition:)
Replies: 6
Views: 2582

The key here, and really on most critical reading passages, is to focus on the conclusion. The conclusion states that when airline 1 increases its fares to recoup the money lost on decreasing earlier fares, other companies will come in and take advantage of the opportunity to gain customers due to t...

by ssilver0210

Sun Mar 15, 2009 12:50 pm
Forum: Critical Reasoning
Topic: Airlines !!
Replies: 4
Views: 3810

Assume the opposite of choice A, here. In other words, assume that the number of people for whom seeing an excerpt of a book in a magazine provides an adequate substitute for reading the whole book is not smaller than the number for whom the excerpt stimulates a desire to read the book. In other wor...

by ssilver0210

Sun Mar 15, 2009 12:43 pm
Forum: Critical Reasoning
Topic: Effective Kind of Publicity - Q57 OG-11
Replies: 16
Views: 8595

In a question like this, it's best to explain all answer choices, and determine which is least likely to help explain the drop in air pollution levels in 1989. A helps to explain why the drop wasn't until 1989, because the new measure were not put into effect until very late in 1988. B helps to expl...

by ssilver0210

Sun Mar 15, 2009 12:33 pm
Forum: Critical Reasoning
Topic: Tough one
Replies: 3
Views: 1302