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essay-- new business opportunities in Helios

Hi, I got the argument from the official website of GMAC. Here's the argument and my answer. Please rate my essay, thanks :) The following appeared as part of an article in a magazine devoted to regional life: “Corporations should look to the city of Helios when seeking new business opportunities ...

by stesteste

Tue Oct 10, 2017 6:03 am
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: essay-- new business opportunities in Helios
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Please score my essay..

The following appeared as part of an article in a daily newspaper: “The computerized on-board warning system that will be installed in commercial airliners will virtually solve the problem of midair plane collisions. One plane's warning system can receive signals from another's transponder—a rad...

by stesteste

Mon Oct 09, 2017 6:50 am
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: Please score my essay..
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First Trenches-- need help!

The first trenches that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence for centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East that were arising simultaneously with but independently of the more celebrated city-states of southern Mesop...

by stesteste

Sun Oct 08, 2017 10:27 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: First Trenches-- need help!
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