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I think it has all the information needed. your analogy is top-notch. your ideas are clearly stated.
i think the only thing missing is a conclusion. bravo!
- by na94
Thu Oct 06, 2016 4:03 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Would you like to review my AWA Essay? Thank you!!!
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AWA feedback please?
The following is an excerpt from a memo written by the head of a governmental department: "Neither stronger ethics regulations nor stronger enforcement mechanisms are necessary to ensure ethical behavior by companies doing business with this department. We already have a code of ethics that com...
- by na94
Thu Oct 06, 2016 12:42 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: AWA feedback please?
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