How can I make myself more appealing? MBA Profile Evaluation

Hi, first of all, I want to say thank you for your time reading this any feedback that is provided. This is the beginning of my journey and your advise is greatly appreciated! - Jimmy Targeted Schools: Top 10 Target Round: Pre-GMAT, Fall of 2016 26, Male, NYC Education: 29 ACT 3.1 GPA, B.S. in Mathe...