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Essay Feedback Appreciated 2
This is my second argument essay written. Any feedback is appreciated. Topic: The following appeared in an article written by Dr. Karp, an anthropologist. "Twenty years ago, Dr. Field, a noted anthropologist, visited the island of Tertia and concluded from his observations that children in Tert...
- by mnealbw
Sun Apr 19, 2015 8:26 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Essay Feedback Appreciated 2
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Essay Feedback Appreciated
This is my second issue essay I've written. I tried to add length and attempt to make it a stronger essay, but I'm thinking I'm better at argument essays than issue essays. Possibly due to the fact that it's easier for me to pick apart an argument than come up with my own. I would appreciate any sug...
- by mnealbw
Sun Apr 19, 2015 8:21 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Essay Feedback Appreciated
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Thank you so much for your response! I plan on doing at least a couple of essays every week before I take my test. I just wanted an idea of where I stand, since it has been years since I've written essays like these. In your opinion, what do you think each of my essays would score? I would like to k...
- by mnealbw
Mon Apr 13, 2015 3:53 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Essay Feedback Appreciated
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Essay Feedback Appreciated
This is an argument essay I wrote. I tried to stay true to the 30 minute time limit. Any feedback would be appreciated. Thank you! Prompt: The vice president of human resources at Climpson Industries sent the following recommendation to the company's president. "A recent national survey found t...
- by mnealbw
Mon Apr 13, 2015 1:36 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Essay Feedback Appreciated
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Any Essay Feedback Appreciated
Below is an Issue task I wrote. I tried to stay true to the 30 minute window, but I did had to stop once due to an interruption. Any feedback would be appreciated so I can get an idea of what I need to work on. Thank you! Prompt: We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than f...
- by mnealbw
Mon Apr 13, 2015 1:33 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Any Essay Feedback Appreciated
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