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Please review my essay and provide feedback : AWA
The following appeared in a memo sent from a baseball team's marketing director: In order to improve attendance and revenue, we should redo our logo, colors, and mascot. Over the past five seasons, while our attendance has stagnated and our merchandising has decreased, the four new teams in our lea...
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Sun May 08, 2016 10:17 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please review my essay and provide feedback : AWA
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Teachers at a public high school stated that although anti-r
Teachers at a public high school stated that although anti-racism workshops had been conducted with the student body, the incidence of racist remarks were still considerably high. A. although anti-racism workshops had been conducted with the student body, the incidence of racist remarks were B. even...
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Mon May 02, 2016 7:44 am- Forum: Sentence Correction
- Topic: Teachers at a public high school stated that although anti-r
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For her customer feedback score, Jess wants to average at or
For her customer feedback score, Jess wants to average at or above an 8.0 rating. For the
month of June, she received the following scores: 7, 8, 8, 7, 9, 10, 6, 6, 8 and 7. By what percent
did she fall short of her goal?
(A) 4%
(B) 5%
(C) 8%
(D) 10%
(E) 12%
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Mon May 02, 2016 1:20 am- Forum: Problem Solving
- Topic: For her customer feedback score, Jess wants to average at or
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Manhattan SC guide doubt
Finally, the Present Perfect can be used in -ing forms, infinitives or subordinate clauses to clarify an ambiguous sequence in time. For instance, the word when can mean either “at the same time� or “after.� The use of Present Perfect resolves the meaning. Right: She WILL PAY you when you A...
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Mon Apr 25, 2016 7:40 am- Forum: Sentence Correction
- Topic: Manhattan SC guide doubt
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Some of the first attempts to standardize business practices
Some of the first attempts to standardize business practices came about during wartime. In World War I, shells frequently failed to detonate simply because two British armament manufacturers had slightly different definitions of an inch. During World War II, Britain placed inspectors in weapons fact...
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Tue Apr 19, 2016 9:54 am- Forum: Reading Comprehension
- Topic: Some of the first attempts to standardize business practices
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Though perhaps less visceral and emotionally satisfying than
Source: Veritas Though perhaps less visceral and emotionally satisfying than her previous novels, “The Namesake� attests to Jhumpa Lahiri’s ability to write a best seller that moves back and forth between the comic and tragic, the satirical and the intimately personal A)that moves back and for...
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Fri Apr 15, 2016 7:07 am- Forum: Sentence Correction
- Topic: Though perhaps less visceral and emotionally satisfying than
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Although the fear last year that the trade zone might break apart had receded, the risk now could be prolonged stagnation of the kind that has plagued Argentina for the past two decades . (A) had receded, the risk now could be prolonged stagnation of the kind that has plagued Argentina for the past...
- by conquistador
Wed Apr 13, 2016 3:31 am- Forum: Sentence Correction
- Topic: Although the fear last year: T3, V 28
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Vertias prep test The following appeared as part of an article reviewing summer camps for children. Parents, if you need a summer camp for your children look no further than Federville Farms. In a recent survey, Federville Farms ranked first in both overall camper satisfaction and in food quality, a...
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Mon Apr 11, 2016 2:31 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Review AWA and provide feedback
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EPO
Erythropoietin, known also as EPO, is a glycoprotein hormone that controls the production of red blood cells in a process called erythropoiesis. When the kidneys detect a lack of oxygen flowing through the bloodstream, they secrete this glycoprotein, increasing the production of red blood cells, the...
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Sun Apr 10, 2016 6:14 am- Forum: Reading Comprehension
- Topic: EPO
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Relieving an impoverished country of its debt would seem to
Source: Veritas Relieving an impoverished country of its debt would seem to almost unavoidably help the citizens of that nation. Indeed, health care and education spending is now greater than debt service payments in many countries that have been granted partial debt relief by the Heavily Indebted P...
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Sat Apr 09, 2016 9:46 am- Forum: Reading Comprehension
- Topic: Relieving an impoverished country of its debt would seem to
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Fri Apr 08, 2016 1:01 am- Forum: Data Sufficiency
- Topic: Is (y–10)2>(x+10)2?
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Wed Apr 06, 2016 4:45 am- Forum: Data Sufficiency
- Topic: Is xy>24
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In Iwokrama, Guyana, reduced-impact logging sustains fore
In Iwokrama, Guyana, reduced-impact logging sustains forest preservation, wildlife protection, and crabwood oil production, identifying the best ways to fell trees. A. In Iwokrama, Guyana, reduced-impact logging sustains forest preservation, wildlife protection, and crabwood oil production, identif...
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Sun Apr 03, 2016 5:40 am- Forum: Sentence Correction
- Topic: In Iwokrama, Guyana, reduced-impact logging sustains fore
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Hi Meera. One thing that does jump out is that what you wrote does not exactly match the prompt. You talk of ChromeChannel as a potential web advertiser whereas actually ChromeChannel is a purveyor of web advertising. I really have no idea how I misconstrued this point. This indeed looks like a gra...
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Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:32 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please review my essay and provide feedback : AWA
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In 2001, Hispanic workers in California earned on an average
Source: Egmat In 2001, Hispanic workers in California earned on an average twelve dollars a week less than Caucasian workers had; by 2013, they were earning almost six dollars less. A. Caucasian workers had; by 2013, they were earning almost six dollars less B. Caucasian workers had earned, a figure...
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Tue Mar 29, 2016 2:00 am- Forum: Sentence Correction
- Topic: In 2001, Hispanic workers in California earned on an average
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