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But this is really from Parallelism.The Manhattan SC said that these two sides are not ctructurally parallel.In order to achieve parallelism, we can rewrite the sentence replacing giving with the noun gift,so that the two sides of the being verb are structurally similar:The flower bouquet was the hu...

by MinnieLiu

Tue Oct 15, 2013 9:58 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Parallelism
Replies: 3
Views: 1260

Parallelism

From the Manhattan SC:
The flower bouquet was the husband's giving of love to his wife.
The two sides of the being verb was are flower bouquet and husband's giving of love.Why are the two sides not structurally parallel?
Thanks!

by MinnieLiu

Tue Oct 15, 2013 1:04 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Parallelism
Replies: 3
Views: 1260

hehe~~ O(∩_∩)O~~Thanks for your help.I learned so much from the discussion. I think I am little out of Sync with the ongoing discussion :) Anyways, MinnieLiu I would like to convey some rules: - "which" generally modifies the nearest legitimate Noun - "which" is used to intro...

by MinnieLiu

Wed Oct 09, 2013 9:41 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: pronoun case
Replies: 11
Views: 1929

Okay,thanks very much~ Put a comma before which,the sentence is also incorrect,you mean that? We finally returned all the books to the library,which we left at the front desk. Here "which" modifies "library" and is wrong. We are talking about "books" here. Is this right...

by MinnieLiu

Wed Oct 09, 2013 9:06 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: pronoun case
Replies: 11
Views: 1929

I don't know the differences between the three sentence. 1.we finally returned all the books that we left at the front desk to the library. 2.We returned those books, which we left at the front desk, to the library. 3.we left the books, (which we had) at the front desk of the library. They express t...

by MinnieLiu

Wed Oct 09, 2013 8:52 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: pronoun case
Replies: 11
Views: 1929

Put a comma before which,the sentence is also incorrect,you mean that? We finally returned all the books to the library,which we left at the front desk. Here "which" modifies "library" and is wrong. We are talking about "books" here. Is this right?We finally returned al...

by MinnieLiu

Wed Oct 09, 2013 8:30 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: pronoun case
Replies: 11
Views: 1929

@theCodeToGMAT,Umm..I see.The word that is better than which for important part.But the given answer is "We finally returned all the books, leaving them at the library's front desk." Are both of them correct? And in the given answer,"leaving them at the library's front desk" is a...

by MinnieLiu

Wed Oct 09, 2013 8:29 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: pronoun case
Replies: 11
Views: 1929

pronoun case

We finally returned all the books to the library,which we left at the front desk. This is a sentence form Manhattan SC,it's about pronoun.The corrected answer is:We finally returned all the books , leaving them at the library's front desk. Here,which in the first sentence refers to the books,right? ...

by MinnieLiu

Wed Oct 09, 2013 7:05 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: pronoun case
Replies: 11
Views: 1929

I probably know the meaning now,there is a word that omitted after the word tell ,right? MinnieLiu, if you change the sentence to: Samantha's face looked blurry in the photo, but I could tell Samantha not to smile. - the second clause "i could..smile" has gone awkward.. - Also, the meaning...

by MinnieLiu

Wed Oct 09, 2013 4:15 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: "tell sb be doing" construction is right??
Replies: 6
Views: 1917

Thanks.Now I understand the meaning,the second sentence is "I could tell (that) Samantha wasn't smiling",right? from Manhanten SC: Samantha's face looked blurry in the photo,but I could tell Samantha wasn't smiling. In my opinion,correct the sentence like this: but I could tell Samantha no...

by MinnieLiu

Wed Oct 09, 2013 4:04 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: "tell sb be doing" construction is right??
Replies: 6
Views: 1917

"tell sb be doing" construction is right??

from Manhanten SC:
Samantha's face looked blurry in the photo,but I could tell Samantha wasn't smiling.
In my opinion,correct the sentence like this:
but I could tell Samantha not to smile.
So,is there anyone could tell me why the first construction is right?

by MinnieLiu

Wed Oct 09, 2013 1:46 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: "tell sb be doing" construction is right??
Replies: 6
Views: 1917

I think "sun" is the subject,"shining on the flowerbeds" just modifies the subject.j True that! Sentence can be written in many different formats ,but I think you are talking about the Subject -Verb agreement here. The correct sentence would be After all the gardening we did , th...

by MinnieLiu

Fri Oct 04, 2013 3:31 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Sub-Verb Agreement error
Replies: 10
Views: 4337