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"A year ago Apex Manufacturing bought its managers computers for their homes and paid for telephone connections so that they could access Apex computers and data files from home after normal business hours. Since last year, productivity at Apex has increased by 15 percent. Other companies can ...
- by skj_2013
Sun Jun 23, 2013 5:09 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate my Essay - 2
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Good structure and I think it's easily a 5. I am probably nit picking but your 3rd objection to the argument) is a combination of first 2. It feels a bit repetitive. I have tried thinking of other possible criticisms but I think it really boils down to the fact that the management has failed to take...
- by skj_2013
Sun Jun 23, 2013 4:04 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate essay <first attempt>
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Please Rate my Essay
The following was used as part of an internet advertising company's appeal to businesses: Furniture Depot employed our internet advertising company to help. Since then its sales increased by 10% over last year's totals. Furniture Depot's success demonstrates how using our internet services can incr...
- by skj_2013
Sun Jun 23, 2013 3:46 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please Rate my Essay
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