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The following appeared as part of an advertisement for Adams, who is seeking reelection as governor: ‘Reelect Adams, and you will be voting for proven leadership in improving the state’s economy. Over the past year alone, 70 percent of the state’s workers have had increases in their wages, 5,000 ne...

Organizations should be structured....

‘Organizations should be structured in a clear hierarchy in which the people at each level, from top to bottom, are held accountable for completing a particular component of the work. Any other organizational structure goes against human nature and will ultimately prove fruitless.’ The statement ab...

The primary responsibility of citizens is to obey...

‘The primary responsibility of citizens is to obey their nation’s civil and criminal laws.’ The sentence above states that the first responsibility of the citizens is to obey their nation’s civil and criminal laws. It‘s certainly true that in order to have a peaceful society everybody have to obey ...

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The following appeared in the editorial of a local newspaper: ‘In the first four years that Montoya has served as mayor of the city of San Perdito, the population has decreased and the unemployment rate has increased. Two businesses have close for each new business that has opened. Under Varro, who...

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The following appeared in the editorial section of a corporate newsletter: ‘The common notion that workers are generally apathetic about management issues is false, or at least outdated: a recently published survey indicates that 79 percent of the nearly 1,200 workers who responded to survey questi...

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