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Please review my essay. Thanks!!

Seniority (years of service) should not be the basis of employee compensation. Employees should be promoted and given raises solely on the basis of their work performance and merit. That is a better way to encourage high productivity. Discuss the extent to which... My response: The question whether ...

by mg123

Tue Aug 05, 2008 1:58 am
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: Please review my essay. Thanks!!
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VP_Jim, Thank you for reviewing!
It really helped me :D

by mg123

Mon Aug 04, 2008 10:42 pm
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: Please review my essay. Thanks a lot!!
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Please review my essay. Thanks a lot!!

“Corporations and other businesses should try to eliminate the many ranks and salary grades that classify employees according to their experience and expertise. A ‘flat’ organizational structure is more likely to encourage collegiality and cooperation among employees.” My essay: While some might sup...

by mg123

Tue Jul 29, 2008 12:19 am
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: Please review my essay. Thanks a lot!!
Replies: 2
Views: 4547