Hi! I worked on the same Kaplan essay too. A review from experts and peers will be greatly appreciated. Thanks, Nat >>> The writer suggests increasing the price of postage stamps as it will bring benefits from three specific aspects – gain revenue, reduce volume of mail and improve workers’ mora...

Thanks, Brent. You've offered a very good takeaway on understanding the type of argument and what critique is required! I hope I will stay on topic / address the argument more directly the next time.

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Campus vs social media recruitment - please rate my essay

"Seven years ago, Zephyr Industries had no problem recruiting qualified candidates from college campuses. This year, however, Zephyr has hired only three qualified interns, fewer than one-quarter of those hired in each of the three preceding years. This suggests that the company's recruitment ...