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Please rate my essay!
Dear Brian, please take a look at the below, whether it is going again in the right direction. Thanks, Odoaker The following appeared as part of an editorial in an industry newsletter: "While trucking companies that deliver goods pay only a portion of highway maintenance costs and no property t...
- by odoaker
Fri Feb 15, 2013 7:25 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate my essay!
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Thanks a lot, Brian. As I said, I wasn't too comfortable with the question and I am not surprised about your rating. To be honest, I did not have many ideas in those 30min - I'll think about your comments and try to improve my strategy to write an essay where I am not comfortable with the question. ...
- by odoaker
Sat Feb 09, 2013 6:59 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate my essay!
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Please rate my essay!
Dear Brian, since I was not very comfortable with the question, can you please take a look again at my essay? Your help is highly appreciated! What kind of score would I get? Thanks, Odoaker „Motorcycle X has been manufactured in the United States for over 70 years. Although one foreign company ha...
- by odoaker
Fri Feb 08, 2013 8:34 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate my essay!
- Replies: 3
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Thanks a lot, Brian!!! Your comments are very helpful and highly appreciated. My GMAT will be end of February, so I'll do another 2 practice essays at least. If I need some help again I'll let you know.
Cheers,
Odoaker
- by odoaker
Thu Jan 31, 2013 9:05 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate my second essay!
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Please rate my second essay!
The following appeared in a magazine article on trends and lifestyles. „In general, people are not as concerned as they were a decade ago about regulating their intake of red meat and fatty cheeses. Walk into the Heart’s Delight, a store that started selling organic fruits and vegetables and who...
- by odoaker
Wed Jan 30, 2013 12:30 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate my second essay!
- Replies: 2
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Thanks a lot, Brian!!!
I will work on it. I'll time myself again tomorrow and let you know. I promise to make it three body paragraphs 
Regards,
Odoaker
- by odoaker
Mon Jan 28, 2013 9:25 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate my first AWA essay!
- Replies: 8
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Dear Brian, please take a look at the rewritten essay and let me know if you see an improvement. I will read some more sample essays and wait for your reply. Wednesday I am doing a full practice GMAT, so an essay on a new topic will follow then. Thanks, Odoaker The Author of the report argues that t...
- by odoaker
Mon Jan 28, 2013 10:15 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate my first AWA essay!
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2007
Thanks a lot, Brian!
Your comments are really helpful and I shall go through the articles/samples and rewrite the essay.
Odoaker
- by odoaker
Wed Jan 23, 2013 10:00 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate my first AWA essay!
- Replies: 8
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Please rate my first AWA essay!
The following appeared as part of an annual report sent to stockholders by Olympic Foods, a processor of frozen foods: “Over time, the costs of processing go down because as organizations learn how to do things better, they become more efficient. In color film processing, for example, the cost of ...
- by odoaker
Wed Jan 23, 2013 5:56 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate my first AWA essay!
- Replies: 8
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