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Before I start I just want to say to vaibhavgupta that this is not me trying to bash your essay or anything. Alex, you do a great job of going through and providing feedback for so many essays. You called this one "not near perfect, just perfect". While going through this essay, I noticed ...
- by Picchi
Tue Nov 01, 2011 9:30 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Analysis of am Argument
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Please rate my argument essay. Thank you!
“Each generation of Americans has lived longer that the ones preceding it, as the national life expectancy has approached 80 years old in recent years. The progress of medical technology shows no sign of abating. Therefore, we can confidently predict that most children born in America in the next ...
- by Picchi
Sat Oct 22, 2011 8:35 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate my argument essay. Thank you!
- Replies: 1
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