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by neha.patni » Fri Apr 23, 2010 10:26 pm
The health benefits of tea have been the subject of much research; in addition to its possibilities for preventing and inhibiting some forms of cancer, the brewed leaves of Camellia sinensis may also play a role in reducing the risk of heart disease and stroke.
A. in addition to its possibilities for preventing and inhibiting
B. in addition to its possibilities to prevent or inhibit
C. besides the possibility that it prevents and inhibits
D. besides the possible preventing and inhibiting of
E. besides possibly preventing or inhibiting
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by kevincanspain » Fri Apr 23, 2010 11:20 pm
First, it's a good idea to identify the subject of the sentence containing the underlined words: the brewed leaves of C. (plural) . After a semicolon, you always find a complete sentence, unless it is used in a complex list

Thus A, B and C can be quickly ruled out.

Looking at D and E, the former contains an unidiomatic expression: the possible preventing.

Choose E
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by neha.patni » Mon May 03, 2010 8:33 pm
kevincanspain wrote:First, it's a good idea to identify the subject of the sentence containing the underlined words: the brewed leaves of C. (plural) . After a semicolon, you always find a complete sentence, unless it is used in a complex list

Thus A, B and C can be quickly ruled out.

Looking at D and E, the former contains an unidiomatic expression: the possible preventing.

Choose E
Thanks for the explanation...OA is E
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by sumanr84 » Mon May 03, 2010 10:57 pm
kevincanspain wrote:
After a semicolon, you always find a complete sentence, unless it is used in a complex list

Thus A, B and C can be quickly ruled out.
Choose E
I was caught in trap. Thanks for good explanation.
I am on a break !!
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by paes » Tue May 04, 2010 3:29 am
kevincanspain wrote:First, it's a good idea to identify the subject of the sentence containing the underlined words: the brewed leaves of C. (plural) . After a semicolon, you always find a complete sentence, unless it is used in a complex list

Thus A, B and C can be quickly ruled out.

Looking at D and E, the former contains an unidiomatic expression: the possible preventing.

Choose E
A, B and C are also complete sentence.
I think they are out because of the word it/its.
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by neonite » Tue May 04, 2010 5:44 am
kevincanspain wrote:First, it's a good idea to identify the subject of the sentence containing the underlined words: the brewed leaves of C. (plural) . After a semicolon, you always find a complete sentence, unless it is used in a complex list

Thus A, B and C can be quickly ruled out.

Looking at D and E, the former contains an unidiomatic expression: the possible preventing.

Choose E
Kevin,

When you say that "After a semicolon, you always find a complete sentence", do you mean that we can't have pronouns referring to subjects in the phrase before the semi-colon?

Also, can you give examples of "complex lists"?
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